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InOne 25-12-2009 03:55 AM
Poem
 
People think they know me
But they really know nothing at all
The more they try to help me the harder I will fall
So give up now and save your breath
Cos every second I am closer to death

sooty 25-12-2009 05:28 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by InOne (Post 2797287)
People think they know me
But they really know nothing at all
The more they try to help me the harder I will fall
So give up now and save your breath
Cos every second I am closer to death
InOne

Why do not you make lists positive things happening around you.
Stop sorry for yourself.

1. I have somewhere to live. - Have you seen homelss people under this weather?
2. I own a computer - Some people can not afford to have one.
3. I can see -
etc.etc. countless things,,,.

"GRATEFUL" this is the key to your life of turning point.

It may be unthinkable word for you at the moment.
Please try.

Oh one thing, you are very good poet.
I would like to read more.

InOne 25-12-2009 05:34 AM
gegdsg

Jords 25-12-2009 05:51 AM
Joe that is a really good poem, but I hope you can cheer up! :)

InOne 25-12-2009 05:58 AM
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Stacey. 25-12-2009 05:59 AM
Come on guys, this is christmas, CHEER UP!!! :D:D

sooty 25-12-2009 06:18 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by InOne (Post 2797376)
Nothing positive about my life sooty, that is why. You're lucky I post that on this kind of forum and you know what I mean
When I was 20, very shocking things happened.
Eversince I never smiled, I never laughed, no emotion, very negative atmosphere.

I thought I would end up in a mental hospital.

One day my elder sister who was worried about me sent me a book.

It was like cross between psychology and philosophy.
When I read it, I noticed I was crying and realised my emotion has come back.

A book saved me. Can you believe? A book. Words are powerful.

If I did not have the book I would have died in a mental hospital for sure.

My husband is in a hospital. He may not make it. Doctor said.
Please reconcile with your parents before too late.

You think it is your parents's fault.
But you have to change not them.

By the way I have never noticed Poem section. This was the first time I visited here.

Do not worry, I will never tell you what to do anymore.

Please keep writing. I will just read.

Happy Christmas, InOne.

sooty 25-12-2009 06:19 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by courtney123 (Post 2797419)
Come on guys, this is christmas, CHEER UP!!! :D:D

:xyxwave:

Stacey. 25-12-2009 06:20 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sooty (Post 2797484)
:xyxwave:
lol:hugesmile:

sooty 25-12-2009 06:20 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Jords (Post 2797403)
Joe that is a really good poem, but I hope you can cheer up! :)
:wavey:

Jords 25-12-2009 06:26 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sooty (Post 2797489)
:wavey:
Hi Sooty :wavey:

InOne 25-12-2009 06:28 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sooty (Post 2797479)
When I was 20, very shocking things happened.
Eversince I never smiled, I never laughed, no emotion, very negative atmosphere.

I thought I would end up in a mental hospital.

One day my elder sister who was worried about me sent me a book.

It was like cross between psychology and philosophy.
When I read it, I noticed I was crying and realised my emotion has come back.

A book saved me. Can you believe? A book. Words are powerful.

If I did not have the book I would have died in a mental hospital for sure.

My husband is in a hospital. He may not make it. Doctor said.
Please reconcile with your parents before too late.

You think it is your parents's fault.
But you have to change not them.

By the way I have never noticed Poem section. This was the first time I visited here.

Do not worry, I will never tell you what to do anymore.

Please keep writing. I will just read.

Happy Christmas, InOne.
I ended up in a mental Hospital. Did me no good man

sooty 25-12-2009 06:53 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by InOne (Post 2797503)
I ended up in a mental Hospital. Did me no good man
I wish I can send you the book. I am sure there was English version.

Harry! 25-12-2009 08:15 AM
:sad: so upseting.

sooty 25-12-2009 08:20 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Recylopse (Post 2797587)
:sad: so upseting.
I am sorry I did not mean it at this Xmas season.

Harry! 25-12-2009 08:22 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sooty (Post 2797589)
I am sorry I did not mean it at this Xmas season.
Dont worry now you have let your emotions out you can enjoy xmas now.

sooty 25-12-2009 08:52 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Recylopse (Post 2797591)
Dont worry now you have let your emotions out you can enjoy xmas now.
Oh you are so kind.

Happy Xmas to you, Recylopse.

Harry! 25-12-2009 08:54 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sooty (Post 2797611)
Oh you are so kind.

Happy Xmas to you, Recylopse.
Thank you Sotty, Call me Harry.

Merry Xmas!

sooty 25-12-2009 09:02 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Recylopse (Post 2797613)
Thank you Sotty, Call me Harry.

Merry Xmas!
Harry :xyxwave:

InOne 26-12-2009 10:04 PM
God, was drunk when I did that, been in my head for ages, not actually that suicidal

MrGaryy 26-12-2009 10:25 PM
love it, regardless


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