My Three Fan-made eyes [[to be entered into the competition]] Thoughts??
 

I'm entering these three, just wanted a bit of feedback...


Right I'll put them in order of my favourites,

here's Number 1, I'm proud of it but out of the three my least favourite...



And best of all- [[I love this bit]]- here's a site showing what the 'stings' [[short trailers]] would look like- http://www.wix.com/joeshepherd1995/eye1

Use the navagation at the top to show each sting!

Will reveal Eyes 2 & 3 later on!

Feedback/thoughts?

If you top that one I'll get Stacey to give you a kiss

Does that mean it's good or bad?

I like that one :)

You'll be doing no such thing! :nono:

So here's Number 2-

with the last one it was sort of spacey/futuristic, with this one it's sort of old fashioned and posh...

firstly without the background-



Now with the background [[I prefer it like this]]



Now here's the stings- http://www.wix.com/joeshepherd1995/eye2


What does everyone think of the stings for each eye so far?

Terrible, sorry. It's got three seperate ideas that all clash. The socket, the eye and the backround. They are all completely different and don't match with each other at all at all.

I quite like the first eye. Get rid of the silly Windows Vista-style background and it'd be nice.

I havent watched the stings. But the first eye(first post, not first in second post) is much better than the second

Second eye is much better. Not sure how exciting in real life an old style graphics package would be though to advertise the show.

The stings are rotten though. They ... don't really have anything cohesive going on in relation to the eye. Just random stock effects dumped in.

Hate the first sting (just reminds me of Celeb. Hijack), like the second.

Third one-

My favourite, and not an eatock design-

Spent ages on this one last night!- it's with a background but it's pretty obvious what it'd look like without...



And here's the stings, [[burning wood]]- http://www.wix.com/joeshepherd1995/eye3#!

What do people think of the stings for all three eyes and also which is your favourite of the three?

Looks like you've tried to make the third one sexy or sultry, you should keep the basic template of the eye the same imo. Out of the three the second one is the best, without the background

I wanted to experiment making a different eye without the eatock template.

I quite like it and it does look quite sexy and suggestive looking at it now actually :L I s'pose that's quite good that you thought that. + I like the idea of the background- a burning eye coming through the woods and you can see from the stings that it explodes.

Sorry to double post but really want to know what people think of the third?

I really don't like the 3rd. It looks like someone tired with random burning trees.

First one is the best, just not on that background.

Okay, thanks for feedback, I like it.

Hmm, I might cut it out of that background and find a better one(:

I don't like any of them and that eye in your sig looks disgusting. :bawling:

Credit where it's due,
The stings are fantastic.

But I'd jump off a bridge if that was revealed as a real eye.

Positive!

All of them you don't like? 1,2 or 3? and thanks, I love the stings!

They are horrid.

Well you've never created one :whistle:

I can only see the Alien/Doctor Who one.

:joker: