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Wizard. 24-06-2018 08:46 PM
My new song
 
‘United State of My Heart’

My heart
My heart
Look at the state of my heart
United state of my heart

My god
Life’s hard
The road is long and it’s tough
Sometimes love is not enough

My heart
My heart
Look at the state of that place
United States is a disgrace

My heart
My heart
Look at the state of my heart
United state of my heart


Just what I have so far.

RileyH 24-06-2018 08:47 PM
catchy :p

Cherie 24-06-2018 09:05 PM
:love:

Nicky91 25-06-2018 11:22 AM
catchy, and i hear Jess Glynne, Clean Bandit vibes all over in this song :flutter: :clap2:

Crimson Dynamo 25-06-2018 11:25 AM
it makes no sense and it seems to have been constructed on one play on words?

Beso 25-06-2018 11:41 AM
Fart rhymes with heart.

reece(: 25-06-2018 11:49 AM
Trump ended

Wizard. 25-06-2018 12:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet (Post 10057877)
it makes no sense and it seems to have been constructed on one play on words?
It’s not the full song and you can’t hear the melody so BEAT IT

Nicky91 25-06-2018 12:29 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Riley. (Post 10057935)
It’s not the full song and you can’t hear the melody so BEAT IT
drag em :clap2:

Wizard. 25-06-2018 12:30 PM
I might upload a wee voice note giving insight into how I start with a song lol

Crimson Dynamo 25-06-2018 12:51 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Riley. (Post 10057935)
It’s not the full song and you can’t hear the melody so BEAT IT
been done by MJ


plagiarism is not pretty

:hee:

Nicky91 25-06-2018 12:59 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by LeatherTrumpet (Post 10057959)
been done by MJ


plagiarism is not pretty

:hee:
that weren't lyrics :fist:

Nicky91 15-07-2018 09:49 AM
we NEED the full song now :fist:

Wizard. 20-07-2018 10:20 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nicky91 (Post 10089085)
we NEED the full song now :fist:
Okay Nicky, I haven't written the full song, you know sometimes a melody and lyric just comes to you and you might not complete a full song for a while or even ever.


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