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MR.K! 03-07-2009 12:33 PM
My song (MR.K!) - \'Get out\'
 
A wee song i wrote and i felt like posting.
It is ment for a woman to sing. Its called 'get out'
(*'s indicate the chorus)


Just dont know what to do
I cant escape from you
my heart is buised right now
just dont know what to say
dont really want to play
these games with you now

But i dont know what to feel in this empty shell
my heart is no longer beating
but this feels like hell
and i feel like fleeing
from your grip right now!

*So get outta my life, get outta my face
cant stand this anymore
so beggin the chase that will last for hours,
and rage on untill the day
but my path is clear, so get outta my way
alas be free okay!*


all i have so far

Twilight 03-07-2009 01:15 PM
I love it:lovedup:

Harry! 03-07-2009 01:15 PM
Good lyrics, What style is it?

MR.K! 03-07-2009 03:52 PM
Thank you two. It was supposed to be soul/pop but i guess it could be anything, even rock. Dunno what do you think? Im too indecisive.

Harry! 03-07-2009 03:54 PM
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?

MR.K! 03-07-2009 03:54 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?
Haha. Good one :D
I wouldnt do that to you.

Fom 03-07-2009 03:56 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by MR.K!
Quote:
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?
Haha. Good one :D
I wouldnt do that to you.
I want to hear even more now haha.

Harry! 03-07-2009 03:56 PM
Are you cool chior or cats chior

MR.K! 03-07-2009 03:57 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Fom
Quote:
Originally posted by MR.K!
Quote:
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you going to sing it and post it for us?
Haha. Good one :D
I wouldnt do that to you.
I want to hear even more now haha.
Haha. Keep hoping!
Aint gonna happen :tongue:

MR.K! 03-07-2009 03:58 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you cool chior or cats chior
Cement mixer choir ;)

Harry! 03-07-2009 04:07 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by MR.K!
Quote:
Originally posted by Harry.
Are you cool chior or cats chior
Cement mixer choir ;)
Super chior more like.

MrGaryy 03-07-2009 04:09 PM
i really like it.

Christina 03-07-2009 04:28 PM
Ooh i like it, i can imagine what it would sound like lol.

MR.K! 03-07-2009 04:45 PM
Thanks all :D
Now that ive though about it i think R&B best sescribes hat i had in mind, with a black female singer, with a slow start and a more upbeat chorus.

M X 03-07-2009 05:05 PM
Love it! :lovedup:

MR.K! 05-07-2009 03:05 PM
thanks. Still havent finnished it yet, dont think i will. lol

Fom 05-07-2009 03:11 PM
Been trying to work out melodies for the lyrics, they words have a good rhythm.

Stu 05-07-2009 03:12 PM
Rhymes nice but content wise it just sounds like another generic typical angry emo rant, sorry.

MR.K! 05-07-2009 03:16 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Stu
Rhymes nice but content wise it just sounds like another generic typical angry emo rant, sorry.
haha Emo !? Methinks not !!
I am not, emo, goth, punk or anything else along those lines trust me.

Thanks for the comment Fom :)

Stu 05-07-2009 03:21 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by MR.K!
Quote:
Originally posted by Stu
Rhymes nice but content wise it just sounds like another generic typical angry emo rant, sorry.
haha Emo !? Methinks not !!
I am not, emo, goth, punk or anything else along those lines trust me.

Thanks for the comment Fom :)
Sure, not emo along the lines of the whole full monty of what the stereotype entails, but lyric wise it certainly sounds like an emo song. Or perhaps a pop song. It's like you just started writting about what everyone writes about - love and losing love - and just foccused more on getting it to rhytme than what you were actualy saying.

When I read it, the first thing that came to my mind was that 'Shut Up' song Kelly Osbourne had.


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