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Originally Posted by kirklancaster

I'm writing a new Film script about an attention-seeking 'Maverick' who is a patient in an asylum for the Criminally Inane (No that's NOT a typo) who sets out to ruin an innocent inmate with false accusations.

I have drafted the first scene but am now stuck.

Suggestions on a postcard, please.

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ONE DROPPED INTO THE CUCKOO'S NEST

Int. Kitchen. Day 3.55pm

Ryan playfully shadow-boxes around Pallett The Mallet.

Mallett
(playfully)
Owww. Woman beater That hurt

Ryan
Go on, what...Did it? Sorry.

Mallett
(jovially)
I was going to ask you what you want your washing on (through laughter) but I might shrink it instead.

Still laughing Roxanne exits to Bedroom with Ryan still playfully tickling her.

Kingston could help...