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Senior Moment
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,675
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BB2025: Richard BB2024: Lily
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Senior Moment
Join Date: Apr 2007
Posts: 40,675
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BB2025: Richard BB2024: Lily
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His biggest problem is the dialogue, it just doesn't flow well, you end up with Jodie talking to herself for like 3 minutes explaining the plot.
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