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Old 24-08-2023, 07:07 PM #13
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Originally Posted by Niamh. View Post
I saw someone re-jig it a bit to "I started seeing someone who works in the Zoo, I thought he was a keeper, turned out he was a Cheetah" that actually makes it funnier I think
Much better!

When I heard that was the winning joke I thought there was potential wordplay to be had, with zoos and cheetahs, but she didn't get there.

Hers feels like a first draft.
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