Locking the thread since the video has been deleted (there's no point leaving it open when there's no more constructive criticism to be given). Please be considerate when giving 'constructive' criticism - which some of the comments haven't been. Firewire, if you do put it back up just let me know, and I can reopen the thread.
I didn't get to hear you sing the song, but if you're just doing this as a hobby then I'd advise you to keep practicing - the more you practice, the more comfortable you'll be with the vocal ranges you can experiment with.
