[LemonJam]

Kate

Better than last week, but not quite there. I think that obsession has a deeper meaning usually, but thats personal opinion. I don't see how you on the mountainside and potatoes make a connection, it's like two seperate art pieces.

I like the swirling and shaping of the mountainside, maybe you could have made more of that, but generally it strikes me as "What has potatoes got to do with the mountainside?"

I can see now that as an artist, you're quite light hearted which is a good thing, but I think that you needed to focus on one area of obsession here.