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Old 06-02-2009, 05:58 PM #96
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Unrequited love sucks, I know, but I think that more of that emotion needs to be put into this piece, using colours, shapes and textures that can represent your obsession.

I think that instead of copying and pasting his face everywhere, perhaps you could have taken parts of his face and put them across the image, that would add more interest in my opinion.

A bit of a step down from last week in my opinion (you did NOT deserve to be in the bottom last week) and I feel that although you love him, you need to remember this is art too, put your full artistic expressions into it.
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