Matt, I'm really pedantic and just wanted to edit the pitch, because there's just a few little punctuation/spelling errors:
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You're probably thinking: 'Why should I pick this advert over the other team's?' Well, we have actually used the most important thing on TiBB. Some people may have stopped at the fact that TiBB is a Big Brother forum. We, however, think that this is not the most important aspect. We feel that the community of TiBB is its strong-point. This is why we have decided to use TiBB members' opinions in the advert; this gives a sense of community and it will attract new members, rather than people knowing it’s a Big Brother site. Also, adding onto this, the use of the TiBB members gives more of an excitement and it’s also pretty original. That's what Team Fetch is about: we use resources available and make it as exciting, original and fetch as possible. And hopefully, the best advert will win – that being ours.
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Sorry to be pedantic, I just got a bit confused when reading it and I wanted it to be as perfect as possible. Can you confirm this change please Concon?
