S@m// says:
heya
S i a * says:
hey
S@m// says:
did u get the question about the pics for part two?
S i a * says:
ooh i can not remember
wgat was it?
S@m// says:
i fort of an idea
like have different pics of the psyciatrist
then at the end
have a full picture of him
S i a * says:
yeah i like that
S@m// says:
Psychiatry: The medical specialty concerned with the prevention, diagnosis, and treatment of mental illness. Different people with different problems, different visit, ten till four. Every week. And my work is never complete
like at the end
so it contrasts the start
then each just needs the time things again
S i a * says:
sent
S@m// says:
kk
S i a * says:
what do you tink?
S@m// says:
i aint seen it yet sorry
im just finishing the illustrations
Written it may be, but the psychatrist's lines are written in a way that makes it seem like they are speaking to the reader and I need to decide whether that constitutes a rule break or not
S i a * says:
hmm
i spose you don't want to risk it
S@m// says:
matt. says:
well, if I decide it is a rule break, the lines would have to be reformatted to make it look like you're the author talking about the psychatrist, not that the psychiatrist is talking to the reader
S i a * says:
ohook
S@m// says:
all he pics are done
S i a * says:
eee
S@m// says:
I ADORE THE NARRATIVE
S i a * says:
aw shucks
S@m// says:
haha its amaxing
ill paste it together into a thread quickly
the pics dont show up for me in the part 1 final thread
S i a * says:
weird!
S@m// says:
its my pc its being a knob tonight
S i a * says:
Aaw]
get a mac
S@m// says:
i have to put ** in every swear word
noo my pc is proper nice
huge screen
really quick
just knows when to be a dick
but yeh i want a macc
they're fit
S i a * says:
my screen is huge
S@m// says:
mines 21 inch i think
S i a * says:
same!
i want a 24" but it was more expensive
S@m// says:
ooer
S i a * says:
like £100 more
S@m// says:
im going leicester tommorow & they have an apple store
we always take pics on the macs
S i a * says:
hahaha
i have photobooth
and it has 500 extras
so not only the cool things in the apple store
BUT MORE
S@m// says:
ooer
S i a * says:
are we doone? i have to go to bed in a sec
S@m// says:
part two posted
ill just word count them
can u see the pictures?
there are 1,460 words
S i a * says:
get in
S@m// says:
haha we cut it by 40
lool
is part two ok
would the pictures look better centered?
S i a * says:
how coem you can only see the top of the psyciatrists head?
and no i like it that way
S@m// says:
thats like how i said
each bit comesu p
S i a * says:
weird
S@m// sends:
S@m// says:
is that ok for the logo
and finally
do we need something to start off part two?
S i a * says:
don't think so
maybe like
"a week later"
S@m// says:
i dunno though cause it says in the naration of brona that its a week later
S i a * says:
spose
S@m// says:
i hope we win this Sia
we have worked so hard
i wont be too confiedent
http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t...lbum/logo1.png logo?
S i a * says:
s'cool
S@m// says:
goodgood
im gonna read it through then go bed
S i a * says:
kkk me too