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Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 8
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Banned
Join Date: Sep 2002
Posts: 8
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The plot needs a twist. How about the baby Clarke falling out of the pram and rolling down a steep hill towards an oncoming bus, with "Super Paul" dashing after it and saving it's life?
Or after eight years they get a letter from the hospital saying there was a mix up at the maternity ward, with Paul saying: "I wondered why he looks Afro-Caribbean", and Helen replying: "What's Afro-Caribbean?"
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