Thread: Just drafted my report for my local cycle club forum..
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Old 19-10-2010, 02:31 AM #7
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Nice article, have you submitted it yet?

If not could I make the following suggestions for amendments:

change cue to queue

change rest bite to respite

change inverse to adverse.
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