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Join Date: Oct 2011
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Grade A Space Cadet
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A limerick is supposed to be a five line stanza using the aabba rhyming scheme. You would have been better
off breaking this poem up into thirteen separate limericks using the aabba rhyming scheme than having one long
limerick that doesn't work as, well, as a limerick. It's a chore to read and the meter is odd.
I'd also learn to spell check too.
Example:
"the doll Que will be there activity."
Actually it's their not there.
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Last edited by Supernovarolla; 06-10-2011 at 07:06 PM.
Reason: Messed up the code. Doh!
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