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My critique of the other girls :

Fleur Titfanny :

Spoiler:

I feel Fleur might be lying to both you and your poor mother. I think this because when answering your mothers question in the last challenge, she said this :

2 Do you believe in staying pure until after marriage and why?

I certainly do believe in staying pure. One of the main reasons I want to marry the Bachelor is so he can take my virginity. Marriage is not just about commitment, but it’s also about taking one’s virginity away, and this Bachelor definitely has what it takes, to take away my virginity. The Bachelor deserves the very purest of angels and I believe I am just that.

But

If you read back through her diary excerpts she says :

First time drunk! I was 14 years old and what a night that was. We partied till early hours in the morning, everyone laughed and danced like they were true celebrities. Later I woke up in bed with my best friend, we were undressed and not fully aware of what we might have done to each other. We haven't spoken of that night since then, but I have never forgotten how special it felt the following
morning.

And :

My 21st birthday was in Ibiza where we did things on the basis of what happens there stays there. Although I was tempted to go back a few more times and re-live that particular pleasure, being the loyal person I am, I stayed true to my word.

I fear that she is trying to win you over by promising her virginity to you and it sounds to me like that is long gone

Amber Gashflap :

Spoiler:

Firstly, I think it's disrespectful to not want to win over your mother, she's the most important woman in a mans life and should be won over, also, why would she have to be dishonest in order to win your mother over? she said this in answer to one of your mothers questions :

I wouldn't want to try and win the Bachelor's mum over, I think its a little dishonest, and it would mean me trying to convey an image and a personality that isn't me.

Also, I heard she got Gonorrhea from that garden gnome

My 21st was a completely different story. I was being raped by a crooked hatted gnome in a shed in Bromley.

I also think it's hypocritical of her to list honesty as one of the qualities she looks for in a man :

1. What three aspects do you look for most in a guy?

I look for honesty, generosity and understanding.

When, she lied to to your sister-in-law in the previous question

2. Have you ever been convicted of a crime?

Never. I'm a legal being. Never broke the law.

3. When was the last time you told a lie?

Just now

Suzy Layton :

Spoiler:

Firstly, I think it's horrific sign of character for a person to steal from children, I was gobsmacked when I read this :

4 What are your feelings on kids - because I want grandchidren by the way and you can forget our day out if you're thinking otherwise?

I love children, I worked in a Creche, but I got kicked out for stealing a toy frying pan, oops.

Also, I fear she may only be interested in you for financial gain, as she lets slip in this diary excerpt :

Hopes, dreams and ambitions Diary I must confess, I have been thinking about the future. I want to marry a handsome rich bachelor and have his babies.

and proves it again in her answer to your friend Marcos question :

1 What three aspects do you look for most in a guy?

Big Dick
Money
Good looks.

Christmas is a joyous and magical time of the year, I would worry that your Christmases would be awful with Suzy, as she says in her diary :

Family Christmas's What do I think of Christmas, oh Diary. Christmas, EW, no. Not in the Layton house-hold!!!


I really didn't like her encouraging your brother to cheat on Darlene either


2) After this process, you are picked as the winner, but you find texts from the girl who finished second on his phone. Nothing sexy from him to her, but you can tell her texts to him are flirty. How do you deal with this?

I'd get you to sort her out Gerard, you'd be my brother in law, you could give her a good seeing too

So there you go Ben, I think you should choose me over these 3 girls because I just don't think they're good enough for you and won't treat you the way you deserve to be treated with honesty, love and loyalty.

Holly xx