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Originally Posted by 08marsh
Erm, not funny. In response to poster above, it's not great writing skills. It reads like a Little Britain sketch, very obvious and forced.
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Quite possibly - but the composition and flow was good.
However, setting that aside my response was more to highlight the unkind nature of the piece in the firm hope that the writer could direct the will and time it took to write elsewhere in their attempt to entertain.
Once again I reiterate the issue of mental health problems - in particular depression. Not a comedic subject (imo).