[waterhog]

5 up - who should go - reply's in poetry on this thread please 03.09.13

Lauren is on a ride,
desperately seeking to be accepted,
at first i thought she was a snide,
but her damage is so deep it can not be corrected.
Sophie is a addict,
i would have liked to have seen the unravel,
not really gelled with her conflict,
she is walking on a unpredictable gravel.
Louie is just to over powering,
he must not get the boot,
i want to start to see him flowering,
even if he sometimes he deserves mute.
Courtney is staying solid,
her friendship with Lauren is blooming,
a little betrayal but nothing squalid,
i love together there grooming.
Bruce is a disaster walking,
really gone off every quality,
he is a misery and pointless talking,
there is no "coronation street" royalty.
i have made my case,
now a decision is in need,
who should loose there place,
i hope Bruce or Sophie are in this seed.

( as this has taken off so well and all the poems in reply's to my last threads are 10 times better then mine - please can i continue to see reply's in poetry. thanking you. )