[Rory]

Looks great, telefan. You proved me wrong. However, I do think that the change in pitch of the ad kind of throws it off. I actually liked the deeper beginning pitch of the BB theme in the beginning of the advert.

I also see that you're going with a sort of twisted eye, which I do like. However, I am not sure if you're doing this or not, I think a good recomendation would be to make the eye sort of a lock-like structure. Going in a full circle.