[Will.]

These auditions videos aren't very good in my opinion:

Sam: seems to scripted and generally fake, I don't believe half of what you say, it's need flow naturally.

Kieran: first of all it took him over a minute to actually understand who he was, the video was boring and iratating.

They need to show who you are as a person and I felt neither of them got your personality across.
The video needs to go straight into things, and flow quickly and not feel edited.
I doubt neither of you will be getting callbacks.