[Will.]

Originally Posted by Mokka

Great Job Will!!!

Thanks

Originally Posted by Cherie

I liked it Will..some good camera work there...minor thing when she read the text you could see it was from Mum rather than twin..I liked the ending and change of clothes

Thank you!

Originally Posted by Daniel-X

I actually thought t was really well edited and put together. Well done Will. Only minor thing is like Marsh said you can tell the car is being started rather than being parked at the beginning.

Thank you