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Originally Posted by That Girl
miss katherine did that!
i really liked it 
why didn't sam want people in the house btw  like what were the concerns that made him uneasy
alseaux was the killer going to frame someone else for it? like sam and rachel seemed like the nicest people in the group so idk why someone would murder him unless they only did it to frame one of the nasty hoe's like ana |
Well(
), because this was an idea for a novel that turned into a short story, I had to compress my plot.
Basically, Samuel is someone that seems quite harmless, but has ties to the others (he's cheating on his wife with one of the other ladies, was the person who provided intel that Evan was an alcoholic, etc) that all provide reason for his murder.
Maybe so
I was actually going to end it by saying that Rachel did it, but then I thought that wasn't true to what I wanted. Also, I wasn't really able to transgress that through my story-telling (as I thought portraying Rachel a someone with a mental illness would be quite interesting albeit a tad difficult) She would definitely be a suspect though in the novel version though, along with everyone else. Ana too, there could sub-plots, like, why is Katherine such a mother to Ana? That sort of thing.