[Jack_]

This is actually getting better but it needs a lot of work, the problem is it's trying to be too many things at once

It's not long enough for starters, so I'd say making it 45 minutes and then moving it to 10:30 would be a good move. Keep the topical monologue at the start of the show cause that's the strongest part, then have two guests on the sofa, a stand up comedy segment at the end and also a house band. Maybe chuck in a couple of irreverent games now and then

The set is far too flashy also, it needs a homely, wooden feel with a skyline backdrop