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Originally posted by Magic-Shoes
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Originally posted by sunshine30
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Message original : Magic-Shoes
Will somebody do that - then you can critise my work and tell me how to improve!
How about if i did
TIBB's Makeover War'
The story of how TIBB FM battle over the makeover suggestions! LOL
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There is no war, don't create one then. 
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HaHa! No i mean make out there is one - typical journalist! 
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Try writing a realistic story, maybe related to terrorism or politics. Try and stay away from forum articles if you want to write something that looks professional.