[Sam!]

I like it, its interesting in oringinal but you really need to work on your punctuation and sentence structure

"It was Tuesday night Mrs mayne (Edna) who was a quiet old lady and without fail would always smell of Murry mints her motto was a smile a day keeps all evil away anyway Edna had just finished her Seecond Seet of
fairy cakes for the winter bizarre Seee looked at the clock and it was 5:00 the time Edna walked her dog Milo,so she put on her black tweed coat and went with Milo out the door"

That is one sentence and it cant be, lol well too long.

Still was good