 |
|
| BB11 Channel 4's last Big Brother series started June 2010. Josie Gibson was the winner. All the gossip about the Big Brother 11 house, series and housemates here! |
| Register to reply Log in to reply |
|
|
Thread Tools | Display Modes |
16-08-2010, 09:12 AM
|
#1 | ||
|
|||
|
Junior Member
|
This may seem sad to some of you but I have wrote a John James and Josie fanfiction and I was wondering if I posted it on here if some of you guys would let me know what you think?
|
||
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:28 AM
|
#3 | ||
|
|||
|
Junior Member
|
Thanks, I'm just writing the second part now, I'll post both parts when that one's done, half an hour ish? That okay?
|
||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:47 AM
|
#4 | |||
|
||||
|
Senior Member
|
Be prepared to be virtually hung drawn and quartered :/
__________________
Try to say 'Goodbye' and I choke, try to walk away and I stumble |
|||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:50 AM
|
#5 | ||
|
|||
|
Junior Member
|
Why?
|
||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:51 AM
|
#6 | |||
|
||||
|
Flag shagger.
|
I'm wondering if she really wants to know what people think, or for them to tell her it's good. Be encouraging? Or brutally honest, much like a publisher would be.
|
|||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:54 AM
|
#7 | ||
|
|||
|
Junior Member
|
I want people to be brutally honest with me, I don't care about critiscm, I'm not one of those people who wants to be told I am good when I'm not, I want to be told the truth
 would you let me know what you think if I posted on here?
|
||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:58 AM
|
#8 | |||
|
||||
|
Flag shagger.
|
Quote:
Last edited by Livia; 16-08-2010 at 09:59 AM. |
|||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 09:59 AM
|
#9 | ||
|
|||
|
Senior Member
|
Quote:
|
||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 10:30 AM
|
#10 | ||
|
|||
|
Junior Member
|
Thank you
I'll change the title and post the updates when they are complete
|
||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 10:41 AM
|
#13 | |||
|
||||
|
Senior Member
|
Quote:
__________________
I wouldn't believe your wireless radio. If I had myself a flying giraffe you'd have one in a box with a window, but you can have it all if you like, you can have it all if you like and you can pay for it the rest of your life... life... |
|||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 10:45 AM
|
#14 | ||
|
|||
|
Junior Member
|
Yea, soon, sorry I just had to do something, I'm nearly finished, I think
I'll post the first part for you so you can tell me whether you want to read on...To be totally honest I think this is me in one of my really sad and pathetic moods where I just feel like randomly writing/rambling for the sake of it. This year on Big Brother 2010 there has been what I have been led to believe one of the most genuine relationships out of the whole ten years… John James and Josie and I am going to write what might be a one shot on their romance, it’s not going to be set in the Big Brother house however… Synopsis: John James and Josie meet while John James is in England for a holiday, they have a holiday romance and the time comes where they have to say goodbye, what will happen when that time comes? Will they be able to leave each other? Josie’s point of view… I was out with my girls just having some fun at the beach when I saw the most hunkiest guy I had ever seen in my entire life… ‘’Oh my gosh, look at that guy checking you out Jose’’ my friend Clarissa said to me ‘’Please, he’s not checking me out, more like you’’ I replied as we carried on walking down the beach ‘’No, he’s definitely checking out, look he’s coming over’’ my other friend Hannah interjected ‘’Yea, to talk to Clarissa’’ I said once more ‘’Hi’’ I was shocked when he started to talk to me ‘’Hi’’ I replied, still shocked that he was talking to me ‘’You probably noticed me looking yea?’’ he asked ‘’Yea, but I thought you were looking at my friend’’ I answered ‘’No, I was looking at you, no offence’’ he joked to my friend ‘’None taken’’ Clarissa replied ‘’You fancy getting a drink or something?’’ he asked, turning his attention back to me ‘’Yea, why not? You guys mind?’’ I asked my friends ‘’No, go ahead’’ they replied as I moved to stand next to this guy ‘’I’ll catch up with you later’’ I said as we walked off ‘’So I guess your not from around here?’’ I questioned as we got our drinks ‘’You guess right, I’m from Australia, over here on holiday with my Mum, where you from?’’ he asked ‘’Bristol, so not to far away, so if your on holiday with your Mum, where is she?’’ I questioned ‘’She’s shopping, you know what women and shopping are like’’ he laughed ‘’Yea I do’’ I replied as we continued to walk ‘’You know what I was thinking?’’ he said after a couple of minutes silence ‘’What?’’ I replied ‘’I don’t even know your name, and you don’t even know mine’’ he said ‘’Oh yea, well I’m Josie, and you?’’ I introduced myself ‘’John James’’ he introduced himself also ‘’Nice to meet you’’ I said as we shook hands ‘’So how about we exchange numbers and arrange to meet up sometime then?’’ he suggested as we walked back to the beach to meet my friends ‘’Yea, I’m up for that, but when do you go back to the Land Down Under?’’ I laughed ‘’Two weeks, so what’s your number?’’ he asked, pulling out his phone After exchanging numbers I met up with my friends on the beach… ‘’So, how did it go?’’ they asked ‘’He’s lovely’’ I replied ‘’Yea, we know that, lovely looking, but are you meeting up again?’’ Clarissa asked ‘’Yea, we should be, we’ve exchanged numbers’’ I explained ‘’Ooh, why don’t you text him?’’ Hannah urged ‘’I’m not going to seem like some sort of whack job stalker’’ I laughed ‘’He was well into you’’ Clarissa said ‘’Please’’ I scoffed as we walked back to the car ‘’He was, text him’’ Hannah urged ‘’I’m not going to because remember what happened last time when I was too eager?’’ I replied ‘’Yea, but Ryan was a douche, this guy doesn’t seem like one’’ Hannah said ‘’How can you tell from just meeting him? You haven’t even spoken to him?’’ I asked ‘’I can just tell’’ Hannah replied ‘’Well, if and when I do text him it will be in my own time and with no encouragement from either of you two’’ I said as we climbed into my car When we got home I checked my phone, not expecting to have any texts, which I didn’t I put my phone down on the table to which is started ringing… ‘’Hi’’ I said, smiling at the caller ID ‘’Hi’’ he replied ‘’I didn’t expect a call’’ I enquired, wondering why he had called ‘’Mum forced it out of me why I was so quiet, and I told her about you’’ he admitted ‘’You told her about me?’’ I questioned ‘’I told her that I’d met a girl I was into’’ he explained ‘’Your close to your Mum then are you?’’ I asked, trying to keep it together when he’d just told me that he was into me ‘’Yea, since my Dad died, we’ve become really close’’ he replied ‘’Oh, sorry to hear that, how long?’’ I questioned ‘’Two years, in a building accident’’ he said ‘’Sorry’’ I repeated ‘’It’s okay, anyways, she wants to meet you, do you want to come for some dinner at our place?’’ he enquired ‘’What time were you thinking?’’ I asked ‘’Half twelve?’’ he suggested ‘’Yea, go on then’’ I said ‘’Okay then, we’re staying in Southmead, you know it?’’ he asked ‘’Yea, I know it, I’ll be there’’ I replied ‘’Good, see you then’’ he said ‘’See you then’’ I said The next day… ‘’Where you going all dolled up?’’ Hannah asked, I was hoping to sneak out unnoticed ‘’She’s going to meet John, I heard her on the phone last night’’ Clarissa interjected ‘’Eavesdrop much? Yea I’m going out with John, I’ll see you later’’ I said, walking out the door ‘’Hi’’ he said, pulling open the door ‘’you look nice’’ ‘’Thanks’’ I replied ‘’Come in’’ he said, moving away from the door ‘’Thanks’’ I repeated again ‘’Hello love’’ a women’s voice said as I walked into the hallway ‘’Mum, this is Josie, Josie this is my Mum Helen’’ John introduced us ‘’It’s nice to meet you’’ she said, I held out my hand but she pulled me into a hug ‘’Nice to meet you too’’ I said as she pulled back ‘’Come through, come through’’ she said, motioning me through to the living room ‘’Sorry, she can be a little bit over the top sometimes’’ John whispered ‘’It’s fine, all my family are like that’’ I whispered back ‘’But a good thing is, she’s only like that with people she likes so your lucky’’ he whispered again ‘’That is a good thing’’ I said, looking over my shoulder as I followed Helen through to the living room ‘’I hope you like barbecue’’ Helen said as we walked out onto the patio ‘’I love it’’ I said as I followed her through ‘’Good, now what would you like?’’ she said as she picked up the scissors to open the packets of meat that were sat next to the barbecue ‘’What do you think then?’’ John asked as Helen walked back inside to get another round of drinks ‘’To what?’’ I said, turning my head to him ‘’My Mum, she annoying you yet?’’ he laughed ‘’No’’ I said ‘’Your such a liar’’ he laughed ‘’She’s not annoying, she’s protective of you, it’s nice’’ I replied ‘’We’re protective of each other, since my Dad died’’ John explained ‘’It’s nice’’ I said ‘’Here we are’’ Helen said moments later as she walked back outside, John and I broke the gaze neither of us knew we were holding with each other ‘’Thank you for today, it’s been nice’’ I thanked Helen as I went to leave ‘’Your welcome love, we’re going to have to see you again before we go home, aren’t we John?’’ Helen replied, nudging her son ‘’Yea we are’’ he replied as Helen walked away ‘’Thanks’’ I said as he opened the door ‘’What for?’’ he questioned ‘’Having me here, we met yesterday and you had me at your house’’ I said ‘’It was my Mum, not me’’ he laughed ‘’Yea, but you didn’t try and persuade her not to did you?’’ I teased ‘’No, I guess not, anyway, I’m glad you had a good time, and she’s right, we are going to have to have you here again before we go home’’ he replied ‘’How about we do it just the two of us next time?’’ I asked nervously ‘’You mean like a date?’’ he questioned ‘’Yea, if you want to call it that’’ I replied ‘’Yea, that would be good, I’ll ring you’’ he said |
||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 11:27 AM
|
#16 | |||
|
||||
|
Shhiiiieet 2 yrs l8ta
|
watch out josie he had a bet with his friends to see if he could pull the fat minging one from the friends!!!!
 and like in reality she's vulnerable and "clueless" to his evil ways
__________________
Always keep your eyes on the prize Last edited by Ithinkiloveyoutoo; 16-08-2010 at 11:27 AM. |
|||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 10:01 PM
|
#17 | |||
|
||||
|
Senior Member
|
Coool fanfic buut it begs the question - why write a fanfic on two BB contestants, as epic as bb is? Theyre not like cartoon characters or anythingg.
__________________
TEAM PEPPER LOVE: Sam, Marioo LIKE: Andreww, Steve, JJ MEH: Dave, Corin, JohnJames, Josiee. BYEBYE; Ben, Rachael, Nathan, Caoimhe, Govan, Shabby, Ife, Sunshinee, Rachel, Keeley, Laura, Jo UBB FAVOURITES LOVE: Nikki, Chantelle, LIKE: Brian, Coolio, Preston MEH: John, Ulrika, Makosi, Nick, Nadia, Vanessa, Michelle BYEBYE; Josie |
|||
|
|
|
16-08-2010, 10:14 PM
|
#19 | |||
|
||||
|
🌈 silly cow 🌈
|
Oh, just lol.
|
|||
|
|
|
17-08-2010, 03:11 PM
|
#20 | |||
|
||||
|
Shhiiiieet 2 yrs l8ta
|
anymore? I want to read the part where he giggles shyly when she kisses him.
__________________
Always keep your eyes on the prize |
|||
|
|
|
17-08-2010, 03:35 PM
|
#23 | ||
|
|||
|
Senior Member
|
Quote:
|
||
|
|
|
18-08-2010, 09:46 PM
|
#24 | |||
|
||||
|
Senior Member
|
Quote:
No but seriously, Im getting to like Josie now after the Crab Eyes task.
__________________
TEAM PEPPER LOVE: Sam, Marioo LIKE: Andreww, Steve, JJ MEH: Dave, Corin, JohnJames, Josiee. BYEBYE; Ben, Rachael, Nathan, Caoimhe, Govan, Shabby, Ife, Sunshinee, Rachel, Keeley, Laura, Jo UBB FAVOURITES LOVE: Nikki, Chantelle, LIKE: Brian, Coolio, Preston MEH: John, Ulrika, Makosi, Nick, Nadia, Vanessa, Michelle BYEBYE; Josie |
|||
|
|
|
18-08-2010, 09:48 PM
|
#25 | |||
|
||||
|
Senior Member
|
Quote:
__________________
|
|||
|
|
| Register to reply Log in to reply |
|
|
This may seem sad
Linear Mode
