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|  24-05-2012, 04:05 PM | #1 | ||
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			i got a job after 100 years of being unemployed 24.5.12 dear lord you are truly sweet, i was upside down, you put me on my feet. you no i will work for my boss, i want them filthy rich, with minimal loss. GOD you have been so loyal, i worship you, and courtesy to the royal. its very new and allot to take, trust me, i still got the jitter shake. just like my old job,i will learn, of-course i will make mistakes, my fingers i will burn. i am going to rise like yeast, giving it my best,and never my least. thank you so much, for me who you employ, i love my new job, its all about the enjoy. (not sure how long i will last - but it pays more then writing poems all day.) | ||
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|  24-05-2012, 04:08 PM | #3 | ||
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			For a poet, you have surprisingly very poor grammar and spelling.
		 Last edited by Marsh.; 24-05-2012 at 04:08 PM. | ||
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|  24-05-2012, 04:12 PM | #4 | ||
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|  24-05-2012, 06:14 PM | #5 | |||
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|  24-05-2012, 06:15 PM | #6 | |||
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|  24-05-2012, 06:18 PM | #7 | |||
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			Congrats on the job joe..   
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|  24-05-2012, 07:05 PM | #8 | ||
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			well done joe for the job and this poem flows well.
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|  24-05-2012, 09:57 PM | #9 | ||
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			thank you very much - i just hope i dont start rapping and they sack me - because they are currently paying more then thisidbigbrother.com -  maybe i treat us to a party - but i have to save up first ? | ||
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