[wackeviews]

IS THE JOE RIGHT IN WHAT HES SAYING ? PUT A 10 IF I AM RIGHT IN MY POEM OR PUT A 1 IF I AM WRONG AND NUMBERS IMBERTWEEN ARE SORT OF RIGHT LOL


bye bye boring



you was a disgrace,

start to end,

you thought your looks would keep you,

but even they could not defend.

one devious clever lady,

fall of the charm,

not one man but four,

was a suicide bid and the self harm.

with a smile that did gleam,

that was your hope,

did you really think you could avoid the psychology,

and dodge the microscope.

good bye and good riddance,

your big brother experience was boring,

in one week from now,

we wont even remember that lady called noirin.

[BBitterLemons]

Um, A* for effort...

[Jackie]

Quite good a 5 i think

[28thapril]

I was going to give you a 5 but you wrote Lady Noirin so now you get a 4 there is nothing ladylike about the skank

[wackeviews]

the joe is very happy with all replys lol

[Brad.]

Not a bad attempt at a poem there, 5/10.

[bigbrother10uk]

ummmm.... 3/10