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derek - ch4 - review and feed back - 31.01.13

i have to be careful,
in Hampstead i am often celebrity logging,
"what the hell was that",
was that "Ricky Ggervais" jogging.
before i start,
yet again i did type cast,
i am so sorry "Ricky",
this was due to your comic past.
i did not get you,
while everyone else laughed at the joke,
i put you with "wossssssy" and "Brand",
this is a nasty dig and poke.
but to much judging,
has created a mass -u-turn,
because your dedication to this role,
has my ultimate respect earn.
i loved the "Hampstead" scenes,
the white buss in the village,
and doing the petition on the "High Street"
was just vintage.
this is adult entertainment,
"Derek" i have to have sold,
i would personally hand deliver,
but instead i will forum post which is publicity gold.
well done "Ricky",
next Wednesday in i will be tuning,
"Derek" has started fantastic,
and with my poem i hope interest is ballooning.

(hello to everyone on this forum, i would hand deliver my poem to "ricky" but instead i am going to see if anyone else feels this was as fantastic as i saw it ?)