[jjd0951115]

Hey so I've been using this site for a while and I've literally only just made an account because I just wanted some feedback on these that I made! Please be brutally honest haha

'Mystery Game' - https://38.media.tumblr.com/9dc6bcec...edwko1_400.gif

'Temptation and Envy' - https://33.media.tumblr.com/ffe38e73...edwko2_400.gif

'Domination Segregation' - https://38.media.tumblr.com/71e8e8ca...edwko3_400.gif

How do you think the eyes look? Do the themes sound OK? I've got like further ideas for each theme but I just thought I'd start off showing the image.

[jennyjuniper]

Originally Posted by jjd0951115

Hey so I've been using this site for a while and I've literally only just made an account because I just wanted some feedback on these that I made! Please be brutally honest haha

'Mystery Game' - https://38.media.tumblr.com/9dc6bcec...edwko1_400.gif

'Temptation and Envy' - https://33.media.tumblr.com/ffe38e73...edwko2_400.gif

'Domination Segregation' - https://38.media.tumblr.com/71e8e8ca...edwko3_400.gif

How do you think the eyes look? Do the themes sound OK? I've got like further ideas for each theme but I just thought I'd start off showing the image.

I like them. I like the snake in the 'envy' eye, although if that was a glittery green?? it might stand out more.
I've often wondered what they could do with a show based on the Big Brother book by Orwell? It would be a bit grey and utilarian, but I suppose they good use some steam punk themes to make it more interesting?

[Pete.]

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[Pete.]

I like the Tempetation and Envy eye and theme the best. I like the theme because its vague like Secrets and Lies was and the eye looks flash and urban

[jjd0951115]

Originally Posted by jennyjuniper

I like them. I like the snake in the 'envy' eye, although if that was a glittery green?? it might stand out more.
I've often wondered what they could do with a show based on the Big Brother book by Orwell? It would be a bit grey and utilarian, but I suppose they good use some steam punk themes to make it more interesting?

Thanks. I put the snake in because I just thought its kinda associated with slyness and stuff and I just think Temptation and Envy would be a real cool theme!

[jjd0951115]

Originally Posted by Petemitch

I like the Tempetation and Envy eye and theme the best. I like the theme because its vague like Secrets and Lies was and the eye looks flash and urban

Thank you! I like the theme as well and I know what you mean by comparing it to Secrets and Lies!