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Kate Mulgrew as Captain Kathryn Janeway Robert Beltran as Commander Chakotay Tim Russ as Captain Tuvok Roxann Dawson as Chief Engineer B'Elanna Torres Isabela Merced as Ensign Miral Paris Garrett Wang as Ensign Harry Kim Robert Duncan McNeill as Lieutenant Commander Tom Paris Ernie Hudson as Hazard Team Sergeant/Chief of Security Les Foster Channing Tatum as Hazard Team Commander Alexander Munro Cameron Diaz as Hazard Team Sniper Telsia Murphy Ming-Na Wen as Hazard Team Medic Juliet Jurot Patrick Flueger as Hazard Team Weapons Specialist Kenn Lathrop Gabriel Luna as Hazard Team Scout Perfecto Oviedo Robert Picardo as The Doctor with Jonathan Frakes as Captain William Riker Dean Norris as SkyTech CEO Donnie Lyndon Steve Austin as Andrew Costa, Lyndon's right hand man Nikolaj Coster-Waldau as Tal Shiar Commander Jal'Par Denise Crosby as Admiral Sela and Avery Brooks as Commander Benjamin Sisko tell me what do you think about my proposed ''picard style'' concept? |
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think Coster-Waldau is a perfect casting for the Armada character Jal'Par
and tbh Norris from his breaking bad, under the dome popularity would be a fantastic villain in the star trek universe i feel + we gotta see more from B'Elanna, Tom and their daughter Miral storyline Channing Tatum is a perfect casting for Alexander Munro (the elite force protagonist to work this one into live action as well) Ernie Hudson with his experience is a fine casting choice as Les Foster i think the chemistry Cameron/Channing is perfect for the Munro/Murphy love storyline bit Ming-Na can pull off the coolheadedness of Juliet Jurot character quite well i think |
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Have you wrote any of the story by any chance, or is it just in a concept stage for now?
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Jal'Par: yes but what's in it for us? Donnie Lyndon: a free world for everyone is what it is, a free world, you do know it was that Picard who stopped your freedom fighter Shinzon, right Jal'Par: i understand Donnie Lyndon: i'm glad you do (shakes hands with Jal'Par) (Jal'Par beams back to his shrike class stealth ship) Andrew Costa: what about the voyager crew? Donnie Lyndon: what do you mean regarding those imbeciles, they are no longer a threat to us and if they are well we will have to take care of them, don't we Andrew Costa: i'll keep an eye out for any form of trouble (at a holodeck bar) Kathryn Janeway: computer, coffee black (Riker walks into the bar) William Riker: hello kathryn Kathryn Janeway: hi will William Riker: i really wish the circumstances were better and it was more of a social call but i've come to warn you Kathryn Janeway: oh, what's wrong? William Riker: our satellites have picked up on a romulan engine residue and we have reasons to think they travel cloaked Kathryn Janeway: tal'shiar? well Jean-Luc had just gotten rid of Shinzon William Riker: and they were in orbit for quite some time Kathryn Janeway: really, seems suspicious i agree (news on the tv reporting about skytech's new nanoprobe project presentation with an interview with donnie lyndon) hold on, who is that? William Riker: Donald ''Donnie'' Lyndon, billionaire entrepeneur CEO for SkyTech Kathryn Janeway: Nano technology, i wonder where they got that from, you wouldn't think he's the one the romulans are here for William Riker: i'll do my research on him, i'll let you know as soon as possible what i can find (onboard Voyager-B) Les Foster: alright Hazard Team, we're heading back into the delta quadrant but this time we take precautions, we're keeping one wormhole for a quick escape safe with two other federation akira-class ships, we need to investigate if something was taken from the borg base Alexander Munro: who would want their hands on borg technology? (Janeway and most senior staff beam onboard) Kathryn Janeway: everyone at their stations, we're leaving now, Mr Paris i'll give you these specific coordinates Tom Paris: Yes Ma'am Chakotay: we're being hailed by a galaxy class ship, its Lyndon? Kathryn Janeway: on screen Donnie Lyndon: ah, the infamous Kathryn Janeway, you better stay away from that borg base, and so you know we outrank you captain, with firepower more superior than yours so better stand down (the galaxy cruiser Dreadlock arming their weapons and turning towards voyager) Kathryn Janeway: evasive maneuvers, now Tom Tom Paris: new heading, 1.80.4 (onboard the Dreadlock) Donnie Lyndon: (angrily smashes his padd on the floor) NOOOOOOOO! Andrew Costa: sir? Donnie Lyndon: out of my way, if Janeway wants to fight with us, she can have a war, arm quantum torpedoes, fire with these shield frequencies 2.45.67.84 Andrew Costa: firing torpedoes now (torpedoes cripple voyager-B's engines) Donnie Lyndon: now get us out of here, maximum warp (onboard voyager) Kathryn Janeway: status report Tuvok: hull breach on deck 7, 8 and our engines are offline Tom Paris: i don't get it, we're dead in the water but he doesn't finish us off Kathryn Janeway: of course not, he's going to the borg base obviously without wanting us to follow him (shrike uncloaking in front of voyager) Harry Kim: a romulan shrike just uncloaked in front of us and its hailing us Kathryn Janeway: on screen Jal'Par: i didn't want this, but i need to do what's best for our people Kathryn Janeway: so you side with a freedom loving terrorist Jal'Par: with all that borg technology, i bet he doesn't even need me in some weeks from now, you're right captain, but i'll stay close to them to gather intel Kathryn Janeway: stay safe commander (to Les Foster) assemble a away team, you're travelling to borg space with the delta flyer (in borg space) Donnie Lyndon: here we are, scan all these ships and stations please, i don't want to come to any unnecessary surprises Shada: scan complete, no lifeforms on any borg ship or station Donnie Lyndon: Mining Season is Open Andrew Costa: they'll never ******* learn, incoming shuttle Donnie Lyndon: solve that problem yourself Costa, i'm beaming to the lead borg cube, so we can already take a transwarp coil and our first batch of nanoprobes (the delta flyer fires its phasers at the dreadlock) to be continued |
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Not a bad start Nicky.
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(we pick back up where we left off, with the dreadlock in a battle with the delta flyer)
(onboard the dreadlock) Andrew Costa: helm, attack pattern omega, target delta flyer Lieutenant Davis: aye sir (onboard the delta flyer) Tom Paris: she's a little rustic lately but we're able to shake off the dreadlock long enough for us to hopefully stop Lyndon Chakotay: alright, hazard team, come with me, grab those pattern enhancers, we're going to capture Lyndon, not kill him Lieutenant Munro: aye captain, btw Telsia got a minute Ensign Murphy: yes Alex Lieutenant Munro: i just wanna say, you owe me, for me having saved your life back on the USS Dallas (Munro and Murphy kiss) Ensign Murphy: just be careful out there Alex (Chakotay, Munro and Lathrop beam into the derelict borg base) Donnie Lyndon: secure the borg drone corpses, they might still have nanoprobes inside them (to tal'shiar operatives) Jal'Par: Lyndon, the nanoprobes are only one part of what we're after, we need to salvage the borg vinculum Donnie Lyndon: vinculum? what? why? Jal'Par: everything of information, memory is on that vinculum, we need to know everything they knew on the omega particle (from a distance the away team observing Lyndon and his minions) Munro: Vinculum, oh no Lathrop: we can't take Lyndon, we're outnumbered Chakotay: lets head back to the flyer with this newly gathered intel, something is better than nothing, right (onboard the delta flyer) Tom Paris: do we have Lyndon? Chakotay: negative, but we do know what they are after, the borg vinculum to discover the location of the omega particle (onboard the dreadlock) Andrew Costa: *taps combadge* Costa to Lyndon Donnie Lyndon: Lyndon here Andrew Costa: are we done with our mission over here? Donnie Lyndon: almost, why Andrew Costa: we have another problem and no, not voyager, but 8472 Donnie Lyndon: yes we're done, everyone evacuate back to our ship, 8472 is coming Andrew Costa: so what have we got boss Donnie Lyndon: nanoprobes, a vinculum, couple of transphasic torpedoes Jal'Par: i'll head back to my own ship, and follow voyager while cloaked Donnie Lyndon: yes you do that *whispering* you big bloated romulan moron Jal'Par: what was that? Donnie Lyndon: oh nothing, your romulan highness i said (back on voyager) Tuvok: the delta flyer is back in our shuttle bay Kathryn Janeway: set a course for starbase 116, warp 6, engage Lieutenant Munro: admiral, i'm detecting a high concentrated amount of positronic energy in sector 78, and i also detect a vessel in that area Kathryn Janeway: origin? Lieutenant Munro: seems like a ferengi marauder to be continued |
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I'm up for Ferengi appearances.
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(uss voyager tracks down the ferengi warp signatures to a rogue trading outpost in the badlands)
Tuvok: i recommend we contact starfleet for reinforcements on standby but what we can do is a covert operation disguised as traders on that outpost trying to locate our ferengi culprit Lieutenant Munro: like with the scavenger base in the vorsoth realm? Tuvok: yes, but we now need to thread carefully, there are also dangerous species such as the Breen, Jem'Hadar, some of Toral's loyalist klingon outlaws might also be at the outpost Kathryn Janeway: Janeway to Sisko Benjamin Sisko: Sisko here, what can i do for Voyager Kathryn Janeway: Lyndon and his goons seem to be in league with the ferengi, and they are at a outpost in the badlands, can you give try and ask some of the folk at deep space nine who this ferengi is, his ship is a very advanced marauder-class with some new type of tractor beam Benjamin Sisko: i'll see what i can do, Sisko out (meanwhile on the dreadlock) Donnie Lyndon: and i specifically told that ferengi moron to hide his warp signature Andrew Costa: what do we need to do now? Donnie Lyndon: contact Toral's Negh'Var flagship, desperate times ask for desperate measures Andrew Costa: channel open Donnie Lyndon: Toral, i reckon you could feel the need of some revenge after Martok had overthrown you Toral: Lyndon, you slimy piece of kissass scum, you have some balls coming here Donnie Lyndon: we don't need to be friends, just give our ferengi friend the protection he requires and if he has too loose lips, silence him before he tells the federation too much information (on the trade outpost) Perfecto Oviedo: Munro i don't like the look of this Lieutenant Munro: me neither, but we need to keep a cool head doing this, Oviedo i want you running some interference with the security of this facility, Telsia, find our friend, Jurot, you are our eyes and ears on top level Daimon Sorot: AH, federation! welcome, welcome to my humble little fortress Palosh: Sorot, not your fortress, new guests welcome to this trade outpost, your last chance to resupply before the treacherous badlands Lieutenant Munro: can we borrow Mr Sorot for a while? Palosh: yes, but i must warn you, somewhere where i can see you Lieutenant Munro: fair enough, so Mr Sorot, you have information regarding the borg base components for us Daimon Sorot: yes but at quite a high cost, 20 bars of latinum or i say nothing Lieutenant Munro: (punches Sorot) you tell me the information now or else Daimon Sorot: or else what, Palosh can see you and if not him, hundreds of others can (back on voyager) Harry Kim: detecting a shrike class vessel approaching the station Kathryn Janeway: that must be Jal'Par, raise shields and arm weapons, red alert, hail the station Tuvok: they are responding Kathryn Janeway: on screen Palosh: Admiral Janeway, your officers are still busy Kathryn Janeway: Mr Palosh, check your sensors, there is a romulan shrike class vessel on its way, it is a talshiar operative known as Jal'Par, he wants to know the location of the omega particle Palosh: thank you for the warning, admiral (back on the outpost) Palosh: Lt Munro, Mr Oviedo, i think its time for you to return back to voyager, Jal'Par is coming to the station Lieutenant Munro: 4 to beam back (on voyager) Lieutenant Munro: Mr Paris, set a course for these following coordinates i am transmitting to you now from my tricorder Chakotay: Munro? Lieutenant Munro: the omega particle is hiding, in the delta quadrant, in kazon space (on the outpost) Jal'Par: (fires his disruptor rifle) Daimon Sorot: No Wait! AAH Jal'Par: Mr Sorot, what exactly did you tell Voyager Daimon Sorot: oh was that the voyager crew, i didn't know Andrew Costa: don't test me Sorot (breaks Sorot's pinky finger) Daimon Sorot: AAAAAH, i didn't tell them anything Jal'Par: what did you tell them Daimon Sorot: like i said, nothing Andrew Costa: i don't have time for this (shoots Sorot) extract a brain sample from our ferengi fella there, and bring it back to the lab on our ship (to be continued) |
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Lyndon: Costa, clean up Sorot's corpse, beam it into space if you have to Costa: yes sir Lyndon: helmsman, set a course for the badlands, warp 2, engage dreadlock helmsman: aye sir (on Voyager) Janeway: Mr Sorot has been declared missing, Mr Palosh has informed me, Lieutenant Munro, you had been in contact with Mr Sorot, was there anything suspicious about him Munro: no, although there was someone he was scared of, and i thought i saw the dreadlock also docked at the outpost Janeway: maybe Lyndon is the one he had been afraid of, but anyway, we need to find the dreadlock, to find and destroy the borg technology they've scavenged Miral Paris: Paris to Janeway, there is a shuttle incoming, and its hailing us Janeway: on screen Sessen: the infamous Kathryn Janeway, and this must be your similar infamous vessel Voyager Janeway: i'm sorry, i don't think i know you Sessen: the name's Sessen, Chakotay over there must know me, if i say Seska was my mother Chakotay: who has been raising you? Culluh: that would be me, after our plan of taking over Voyager failed, Seska was killed, and i took Sessen to my warship and we fled back into Kazon space, and i raised him as one of our own, however thanks to this Cardassian, Kazon Hybrid we thrived beyond our wildest dreams Munro: if i may, Mr Culluh, have you heard of a man named Donnie Lyndon? Culluh: never met the man, no, however he has a reputation for himself in the delta quadrant, why? Munro: he stole borg technology from the derelict borg base, he is with an organisation named SkyTech Culluh: your point in saying all this to me Munro: i was wondering, maybe we should team up, against the almighty dreadlock, it is only a matter of time, before Lyndon tries to claim Kazon space as his own Culluh: i'll consider your offer, in the meanwhile i'll speak with the other majes and inform them of this Janeway: safe travels, Maje Culluh and would you like to stay here Sessen Sessen: my place is with my father, he made me the man i am today, a proud kazon warrior (on the dreadlock, in the badlands) Costa: we've arrived in the badlands, Mr Lyndon Lyndon: hail the lead breen vessel and... dreadlock helmsman: sir, we got one romulan vessel decloaking Lyndon: WHAT Jal'Par: power down your shields and prepare to be boarded, the time is here i will claim the dreadlock as my own ship Lyndon: Jal'Par you backstabbing tal-shiar rat, Costa fire phasers and disable that shrike's engines will ya Costa: done, his engines are fried Jal'Par: you think so? check again Costa: sir, the shrike has been regenerating its damage Lyndon: you used MY PRECIOUS BORG TECHNOLOGY!!!!! lets see how you can regenerate micro particles then, powering up tricobalt torpedoes Costa: firing torpedoes now (the shrike uses cloak and evades the torpedoes and escapes via a wormhole) Lyndon: he stole what was in my cargo bay, set a course back to the derelict borg base, we need to fill our technology supplies, and also Costa, begin constructions of a temporal weapon, i want to use that on Voyager, time to put an end to whoever has been messing with my plans |
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(on the dreadlock)
Costa: Mr Lyndon, we've arrived on the edge of Kazon Space Lyndon: hail the lead kazon vessel Costa: aye sir Jerek: this is Commander Jerek, assistent to Maje Culluh of the Kazon Nistrim, you need to leave Kazon Space immediately Lyndon: it might be Kazon Space but we can't leave, not after we got what we came for Jerek: you have no business in Kazon Space Costa: the kazon flagship is powering up shields and weapons Lyndon: like the borg used to say, resistance is umm futile, Costa power up the ion cannon and obliterate that kazon flagship into tiny pieces Costa: yes sir (the dreadlock's ion cannon damages the kazon flagship really heavily) Jerek: abandon ship, this is Jerek calling Maje Culluh, the dreadlock has broken through our first line of defences, we need help, we need help from Voyage....... (the kazon flagship explodes) (on Voyager-A) (listening to the distress call coming out of Kazon Space) Chakotay: oh my god, Kathryn we should assist Maje Culluh, but not with fighting the dreadlock, but with evacuations Janeway: Mr Paris, set a course to the Kazon homeworld, warp 7 Paris: yes ma'am (on the dreadlock) Lyndon: Mr Costa, you have the bridge, i'll beam down to the surface myself with a security team to salvage the minerals what we came for Costa: i want you to have this Mr Lyndon (hands over a portable borg shield generator) this can come in pretty handy down there Lyndon: ah yes, time to put all that borg tech to good usage Dreadlock Helmsman: USS Voyager has arrived in orbit of the Kazon homeworld Lyndon: Costa, i reckon their shields could be down, take advantage of that and disable them if you can from a safe distance Costa: what if you run into them on the surface Lyndon: no worries, these minerals are highly explosive, they wouldn't risk firing their phasers near them (on Voyager) Janeway: Maje Culluh, we've come to assist you with evacuations Culluh: yes, take 100 of my finest soldiers, and take my son with you as well Sessen: father i am not leaving you Culluh: i will be right behind Voyager with a shuttle, but i first have to shutdown certain facilities to prevent Lyndon getting his hands on our supplies Janeway: your men and your son are in our cargo bay, i wish you good luck Maje Culluh: we've had our differences in the past Admiral Janeway, but all of that is in the past (on the surface) Lyndon: team A go into those caves, and collect 50 mineral specimens, Team B go to that village and loot whatever valuable you can, and... (sees Culluh) Dawkins, you come with me and we'll deal with the Maje (Lyndon & Culluh fight) Culluh: you never get your hands on our armory, i made a promise to Kathryn Janeway and my son i would defend them from scum like you Lyndon: never make deals with spineless fools like Janeway, you neanderthal imbecile (Lyndon stuns Culluh) Lyndon: that's that, Mr Dawkins go into the armory and could you please collect several phaser rifles Culluh: you have what you came for, now leave Lyndon: how pathetic, a warrior on his hands and knees, Mr Costa, fire a torpedo at Voyager, put them out of their misery Culluh: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Costa: sir, they've gone to warp, the torpedo barely missed them Lyndon: (taps combadge) this is Lyndon to all teams, return to the dreadlock, and Mr Costa once we're on board, go to warp 8 and return to the badlands (once Lyndon and his teams are gone) Culluh: need to get to my shuttle (badly injured slowly walking to his shuttle) this is Maje Culluh to any kazon vessel still out there, bring me intel on the dreadlock's whereabouts, i am heading to rendez-vous with Voyager |
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It looks fun.
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(the dreadlock en route to the badlands)
Lyndon: damage report Mr Costa Costa: shields down to 50%, we only have 5 torpedoes left, our phaser banks are running on fumes, and we will arrive in the badlands in approximately 42 minutes (a quantum singularity is opening few lightyears near the dreadlock's current location) Costa: uh sir, we have new problems, its species 8472 Lyndon: helm, evasive maneuvers NOW (the dreadlock can barely avoid the 8472 destroyer, whom ignores them) Costa: where are they going Lyndon: don't care for now, stay on course to the badlands, we need to resupply, Mr Costa keep a sensor lock on that destroyer, i wanna know where it is heading Costa: aye sir (meanwhile on voyager) Culluh: Admiral Janeway, here's a list of the items what the dreadlock stole from our planet Janeway: are you sure this is the entire list Culluh: yes why Janeway: no offense Maje, but the dreadlock has far superior firepower than all of the Kazon tribes combined, why is Lyndon interested in any of your technology Culluh: i have no idea Kim: i think i might know why, Admiral, Maje Janeway: enlighten us Mr Kim Kim: these kazon torpedoes might be primitive, basic but once dismantled the contents can be re-used for so called kamikaze automatic missiles Janeway: which he can fire from any location he wants, he can start wars between several species while keeping his own hands clean Kim: we got a vessel incoming, its species 8472 Janeway: red alert, raise shields Munro: that won't be necessary Admiral, this ship is hailing us, audio only Janeway: open a channel Kim: yes ma'am 8472 destroyer pilot: we've been watching you, humans yet again invading other planets, we saw your mother ship Janeway: no that's a misunderstanding, his name is Donnie Lyndon, and its not our mother ship, its his vessel named the Dreadlock 8472 destroyer pilot: and you are trying to stop them from doing more harm Janeway: yes, we saved countless kazon people, this is Maje Culluh by the way of the Kazon-Nistrim, and can i ask for a small favor, could you please keep an eye on the dreadlock's whereabouts, without getting into trouble yourself i hope 8472 destroyer pilot: yes we can do that safely from fluidic space, and last time i saw them, they were heading to a region known as the badlands Culluh: he's retreating with his tail between his legs Janeway: i highly doubt that Maje, more like resupplying at his base of operations, Janeway to Chakotay, inform starfleet command to send some of the strongest vessels to the badlands Chakotay: yes admiral (on the dreadlock) Lyndon: are we resupplied yet Costa: torpedoes are now at 100%, phaser banks are full, now some of our secondary systems need to be repaired |
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