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Old 15-02-2009, 12:54 PM #1
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Womanizer
Written On 14 February 2009

Superstar
I know just how this is going
And I know exactly what ya doing
Try to keep it on the low
But your horny side shows

Look at me
Try to grab all the chicks in here
But no that’s not me
We’re not the same
We’re different species
And I speak for many

Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Your a womanizer
Oh womanizer
You’re a womanizer baby
You, you, you ah
You, you, you ah
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer

I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
I might have you going
But you’re not what I’m doing
I’m quite happy on my own
No matter if I’m alone
Yes I might feel it
But I don’t need it
As much as you
I’m not a womanizer
I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
You say if I say no I’m crazy
But I might just be lazy
I know you feel something
But I feel nothing
No, not a womanizer

Yes, I would be able to get girls coz I’m a champion
But its to bad for you, you will never be my companion
I guess when I have too many
I could be easy
But that’s not who I am
That’s not me baby

Lollipop
You must be mistaken
I won’t be the one you’re sucking
You can play flirty how you want to
But no way I’m never gonna fall for you
Never you baby

Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Your a womanizer
Oh womanizer
You’re a womanizer baby
You, you, you ah
You, you, you ah
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer

I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
I might have you going
But you’re not what I’m doing
I’m quite happy on my own
No matter if I’m alone
Yes I might feel it
But I don’t need it
As much as you
I’m not a womanizer
I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
You say if I say no I’m crazy
But I might just be lazy
I know you feel something
But I feel nothing
No, not a womanizer

What’ya got a realize we’re not all the same
No we don’t all play the point scoring game
I don’t want to patronize a girl for big bust
That you say every man must
Because we’re not the same
Not all the same baby

Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Your a womanizer
Oh womanizer
You’re a womanizer baby
You, you, you ah
You, you, you ah
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer

I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
I might have you going
But you’re not what I’m doing
I’m quite happy on my own
No matter if I’m alone
Yes I might feel it
But I don’t need it
As much as you
I’m not a womanizer
I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
You say if I say no I’m crazy
But I might just be lazy
I know you feel something
But I feel nothing
No, not a womanizer

I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby
No I’m not trying to front who I am
No we’re not the same baby

Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer
Ooh I’m not a womanizer baby
You, you, you ah
You, you, you ah
Womanizer
Womanizer
Womanizer

Not a womanizer baby



Posted Seperatly Since Its Not A Usual Song Of Mine, But I Did Write It
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Old 15-02-2009, 01:08 PM #2
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Old 15-02-2009, 02:24 PM #3
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This is totally out of time with the original tune.
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Old 15-02-2009, 02:28 PM #4
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It's not in time and you're saying "you're a womanizer" when it's the mans version, the woman can't be a womanizer.
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Old 15-02-2009, 02:32 PM #5
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I don't like it, the lyrics just don't work as Ross pointed out
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This is totally out of time with the original tune.
Yep I noticed that.
Have you actually sang your lyrics with the song?
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This is totally out of time with the original tune.
Yep I noticed that.
Have you actually sang your lyrics with the song?
I had someone who actually can sing, because I can't, do it and their were bits that were out of time, buts as a whole its ok with time. Its more really to tell a story than go with the song.
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This is totally out of time with the original tune.
Yep I noticed that.
Have you actually sang your lyrics with the song?
I had someone who actually can sing, because I can't, do it and their were bits that were out of time, buts as a whole its ok with time. Its more really to tell a story than go with the song.
I don't get it.
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Old 15-02-2009, 02:47 PM #9
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1. You've basically just reversed what Britneys lyrics are, not really that creative

2. It doesn't go with the song

3. Yes, songs are meant to have meanings, but the music is you know, usually compatible with the lyrics to try convey it.
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