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Here is the week 4 round up for tibbenders! You can find all of the weekly round up links on the opening post in the Tibbenders episode thread!
Enjoy ![]() __________________________ The Kestle house All of the family are arguing in the Kitchen about Amby walking out with Dezzy 30stone: Oh Shut up mother! Why do you think it is all my fualt! Sia: Because if you hadn't have been so rude and arrogant then she wouldn't have walked out! 30stone: What? You really think i want to hear about a stupid sandcastle! Redmoon: That is not the point Son! He just wants some love off of you! Andy: Yeah, you are a bad father 30stone! Go to your room! 30stone: Oh Shut up Andy! There is a knock at the door Redmoon: Will you get it honey? Sia: God! Do i always have to do everything around here! Sia Walks out of the kitchen and into the entrance. She opens the door Sia: Oh my god! Jdizzels house It is now nearing 7pm and Shaun is round Jdizzels house, both sitting at the table Shaun: We are going to have to call it off hun Jdizzel: What! Shaun: I ust cannot risk mine and Princesses marraige going down the drain! Jdizzel: I cannot believe you! You were going to take me to Venice though! You had tickets and everything! Shaun: I have given them to Princess. We are going tomorrow Jdizzel: But, You Can't! shaun: I'm sorry Shaun stands up and walks out leaving Jdizzel on her own. She stands up and looks out of the window. She see's Shaun and Shouts Jdizzel: SHAUN! The Square Shaun walks up to Billy who is walking home with some chips, billy hears Jdizzel shout and sees his father storming towards him Shaun: Happy now son! We loved eachover! I thought you were going to stand by me! Obviously not! Shaun Storms away toards the vic The Kestle house David grabs Sia by the arm and holds a gun up to her head Sia: Please Go David: Now you will shut up or i will shoot! Sia: Please, No David: Upstairs now! Sia: No! David: Do you want this bullet to be lodged in your brain! Sia: No She starts crying David: Then tell me where he is! Sia: Who! David: You know who! Sia: I don't know! Please! i don't know! David: Tell me! Where is Magic! The Queen vic Nickyy: Well, I better be off now, Been in here since half 3 drowning my sorrows! TheMichael0: What Sorrows, You think you have it bad, then look at me! My girlfriend was killed and it was all Foms fault! nickyy: I wouldn't say that Darling! Themichael0: When he comes back from the hospital he is going to pay for what he did! nickyy: Don't talk stupid! You are drunk, you just need to get home and go to bed Fom walks into the Vic Annie: Fom Love, What is happening! Fom: Ninastar is going to be fine! She will be out in a couple of weeks! Annie: Oh thanks god! Everybody in the Vic starts to clap Darenn: Well, What a relief! Nickyy: Well done Fom! Gregalz: Well done mate! The Michael0 stands up Michael0: And what about Supernoodles! What about her! You killed her! You Killed her! Bigsister: Don't be silly mate! Michael0: Don't be silly, Don't be Silly.. I'm NOT! The Michael0 walks past Fom TheMichael0: You are going to pay for what you did He walks out of the vic and onto the square The Kestle house David has grabbed Sia by the hair and is leading her into the Kitchen with a gun in his hand. He walks into the kitchen Redmoon: Huh! David: Everyone Get on the floor now! He waves the gun around and the family fall to the floor in terror David: Where is he! WHERE IS MAGIC! __________________________ The Kestle house David is waving the gun around and still has Sia by her hair David: You know where he is! All of you do! Now tel me, or she gets it! Sia is Crying hysterically Sia: No, Please no! Redmoon: David. We don't know. Please just let her go! David: Tell me now! 30stone: Just tell him mum! Sia: I can't! David: Tell me! Sia: Please stop this! I really can't! Andy: Mum! Tell him! Sia: I DONT KNOW! David shoots his gun at the wall and smiles David: Now tell me where Magic is The Vic Shaun: I have got one thing to advise you mate Shaun is VeryDrunk Fom: What's that? Shaun: Never.. NEVER.. Have kids! They stab you in the back when you aint looking and ruin all of your plans Fom: Well, Thanks to this shooting, i am not going to have kids anytime soon Fom has a tear rolling down his eyes Fom: Anyway! Don't you think you should get home now mate? Shaun: Don't be silly! Another drink please Annie Annie: I think you should go home now Darling? Shaun: No! It is only 9pm! I am staying for another drink! Annie: Then i refuse to serve you! You are going to do something you don't want to if you drink anymore! So go on, Go home and get a good nights sleep Shaun: Aghh. Bloody bunch of Party poopers! Right, i am going! See you bores tomorrow! Shaun gets off of his seat and falls onto the floor just as Princess walks in Princess: Shaun Darling! Shaun: Gah! You can get lost aswell! I am fine! Now leave me alone! Princess: C'mon you! We are going home! Princess grabs him by the arm and drags him out of the door Firwires house Christina and Firewire are both sat on the sofa Firewire: Another drink? Christina: No. I better go to bed really. Go and sort things out with Mark tomorrow. Can i stay here tonight? Firewire: Of course babe, Because, i think i need to get to bed too, and i don't want to get lonely. So yeah! Christina: Lets go to bed, although i am not tired? Firewire: And neither am i! They Kiss and run off into the bedroom giggling Bigsisters house Bigsister and Darenn are sitting at the table having tea together Darenn: God, look at me! I am sittting having tea with a woman who is old enough to be my mother! Bigsister: Excuse me! I am only 10 years older than you! Darenn: Yeah, and with the state of Britain these days that is an average for someone to have a baby i would expect They both Laugh Darenn: Man, I am going to miss you when i go back! Bigsister: Then dont go! Stay, here with me! Darenn: Don't be silly. The men around here are all jerks. I could never have fun with a bloke around walford, even though they are quite tasty! I like a bit of passion! Bigsister: You've always got me? Darenn: But i'm gay dear. So unless you have a secret son somewhere.. Bigsister: I don't care. I Love you.. Darenn: Where would i stay? Bigsister: Here! You could stay and look after me. Annie is always working at the vic these days and i hate being alone! I could open up the loft and you could have a room up there! Darenn: You really are serious about this aint you! Bigsister: Very. I don't care whether you are gay, we don't have to sleep with eachover or find eachover attractive to be together. I really mean it, I love you Darenn starts crying and gives bigsister a hug Darenn: Look at what you've done now Bigsister: So what do you say? Darenn: Oh go on then! The Kestle house David is still holding the family in the kitchen. Amby walks into the house with Dezzy. She walks into the corridor towards the kitchen. David runs out of the Kitchen door. Amby screams. David Grabs Dezzy by his waist and runs out to his car. Amby runs after him Screaming Amby: No! NO! Dezzy: Mummyyyy! Amby: Dezzy!!! David gets into the car with Dezzy. Amby runs out in front of the car Amby: Your not going! give him back! The rest of the family run out of the house. David shouts out of the window David: You should have told me! Amby: No! Dezzy!! Andy runs and puts his hand through the back window of the car. David puts his foot down and Drives off, straight into Amby Amby: No! Agghh! Andy: No! David drives off in his car Sia: Come back! Redmoon: DAVID! 30stone: Dezzy! Everyone in the family is crying hysterically apart from Amby, who is lying on the road, unable to move Amby: whispering, lying on the road.... He.. help Unknown block of flats A Man, in his late 20's is sitting on the sofa in a dark room. There are no wallpapers or electricity. His phone starts ringing, He looks down at it, it is a call from "David". He sits up and answers it David: Hello.. Hello! I have done it! Now get out of there! We need to run! Our plan worked! I have got the boy! C'mon! i am coming! Magic: Excellent, i will be right there! Magic spreads and evil Grin __________________________ The Square Amby is still lying in the road. Sia and Hugo are sat next to her. She is awake now. Redmon, andy and 30stone have gone in the car chasing after David Amby: It hurts! Sia: It is okay love, the ambulance will be here soon! Amby: Has he got Dezzy! Sia: Yes dear. But the boys are going to get him back, trust me! Amby: Oh nooo! Please.. Please get him back! Please!!! Redmoons car Andy, 30stone and Redmoon are in the car driving very fast in search for David 30stone: It is no use! We will have to let the police find him! I am going top kill him when i get my hands on him! Redmoon: Look, we cannot give up! We know David at least has the decency and he will never hurt Dezzy, we all know he is not like that! 30stone: And where is Magic anyway! It is all because of Magic running away! Andy: What's that! Andy points at a big block of flats, they are empty and boarded up. Outside of the flats is a shoe, belonging to Dezzy. They all jump out of the car 30stone: Oh my god! It is Dezzy's! Redmoon: I think they are in there! 30stone: I am going to kill him! 30stone runs into the flats shouting. He looks everywhere, but there is no sign of anyone 30stone: Dezzy... Where are you! WHERE IS HE! The square The ambulance still has not come, but 2 police cars are parked up. Amby is still lying on the floor. She closes her eyes, and lets out a long deep breath Sia: Amby! AMby! Hugo: Oh no! Amby! WAKE UP! Sia: AMBY!!! AMBY!! They are both stood around Amby shaking her. The Ambulance comes round the corner Sia: AMBY.. PLEASE! Hugo: She's dead mum! She's DEAD! Sia: No, Not my darling Amby! Please no! The rain starts pouring and Sia bursts into fits of tears. People have now started gathering round the ambulance to see what is happening Annie: Sia, What's happening! Sia: No! please! NO! Gregalz: Sia.. What is going on! Darenn: eww, is she dead! Sia: Please.. Please god. Please A small house on the outskirts of London Magic: We should be safe here! Dezzy: I want mummy! David: SHUT UP STUPID CHILD! Dezzy starts crying. David picks him up and throws him into the airing cupboard, locking the door behind him Magic: Now, Step two... we kill the rest of them David: What! Magic: WE need them gone! we need to kill them all! David: All of them! Magic: Yes, ready to go? David: NOW? Magic: YES, NOW! The Kestle house The whole family are in the kitchen crying. The police are out searching and it is just the kestle family in the house Sia: I cannot believe it! 30stone: I am going to kill him! I AM! 30stone stands up in frustration Redmoon: SIT DOWN! 30stone: I hate him! I hate him! The phone rings Sia: It might be the police! Redmoon: I will get it! Redmoon walks out of the kitchen door into the living room The Square David and Magic are at the back of the Kestle house The Kestle house Redmoon walks back into the Kitchen The Kestles back garden David: We wait until they go upstairs The Kestle house Redmoon: THey've found him! They have found Dezzy! The Kestles back garden Magic: What we just wait? The Kestle house Sia: Oh thank God! The Kestles back garden David: Yes! I am here now! no backing out! We just have to wait! The police are gone. There is no risks! The kestle house Redmoon: They want us to go to the station to get him Sia: Oh god! C'mon boys! Go and get your coats and shoes on! We have to be quick! The whole family run upstairs to get their coats in the airing cupboard The Kestles back garden David: look! They have all gone up! Now is our chance! Go.. Do it! Magic: I can't! David: Do it! It was your idea! Magic: I can't! David grabs the petrol. He opens the back door and pours it all over the kitchen. He runs back out David: Now do it! Before they come back down! We want them to be scared! Magic: I can't! DAvid: DO IT!!!! The kestle house Sia and Redmoon are in their bedroom putting their shoes on Sia: What was that? I heard someone sho... There is a bang and a few screams, as the house blows up __________________________ The Queen vic Gregalz: Oh my god! Billy: What was that! Raindropz: Whoa! Everyone in the vic runs outside to see what is happening Firewires house Christina and Firewire are lying in bed. She jumps up Christina: What was that! Firewire: What was what! Christina: That bang? She looks out of the window Christina: Oh my god! The Kestle house- Sia's Bedroom The whole of the kitchen and hallway is on fire. Sia is lying on the floor screaming. All of the windows have shatered and there are distant cries for help from another bedroom. Redmoon is lying on the floor, With blood coming out of his head Sia: Help.. Please! Sia is unable to get up. Her arms are covered in blood and she is crying hysterically The Kestle house- Andy and Hugo's bedroom Andy is stood behind the door. He pushes it closed. HUGO is sat on the bed crying. The room is full of smoke and the windows are jammed shut Hugo: What has happened! Andy: I dont know! But we are going to have to get mum and dad! Hugo: We can't! We don't know where the fire is! Andy: We cannot stay in here! We need to get out! Come on! Andy Opens the bedroom door and is choked back by a cloud of smoke Andy: There must be another way we can get out! The square Most of the residents are outside of the house watching the fire. It has now spread throughout the whole of the first floor of the house Gregalz: Someone needs to save them! Firewire: Christina babe, i am going to go in! Christina: No! You can't! please dont! Firewire: I have to! Firewire walks over to the house, followed by Gregalz and Billy Princess: Bily come back! Billy: No mum! I have to do this! As the three men run up to the house, There is another explosion. Everyone in the square runs back in fear as there is a bang and the roof of the house falls in Sia's bedroom The foor falls in to the bedroom. Sia screams as it falls onto her. Part of the roof has trapped her legs and she cannot move Sia: Help! PLEASE HELP ME! Hugo and Andy's room Hugo: Whoa! We need to get out! Please! I dono't want to die! Andy: Grab a blanket! Quickly, Come on! They both grab a blanket from the floor and put it over their mouths Andy: Ready? He opens the door. The whole house is filled with smoke and the stairs ave broken and are on fire. There is no way down Andy: Quickly! Get back in! They both run back into the bedroom, Shutting the door behind them. Andy is now crying as he sits on the bed, Thinking of what to do Andy: The window is too small for us to jump out of and the stairs are on fire! We need to get over to mums room! The living room The Living room is engulfed in flames. 30stone is lying on the floor, crushed by the roof. He opens his eyes and lets out a groan 30stone: Help __________________________ The Square The Firemen are still not at the house. The whole square are watching the fire erupt through the house Firewire: I cannot watch this anymore! I have to go in! Billy: I'm coming too! Greg: Me too, Anyone else! Darenn: Oh, no thanks. i hate all of that blood and gore! Shaun: Me! Princess: No you are not! You are still drunk! Michael0: I will then! Fom: Fine, i am coming with. We need as many people as we can to get them out. Michael0: Or we could just let Fom go on his own and die! nickyy: Michael0! Fom: I don't know about you! but i would rather save the lives of 5 innocent people! Now come on! The 5 men run up to the house. Firewire kicks the door in. The hallway is full of fire and smoke Greg: We are going to burn to death! Firewire: I don't care! Firewire runs into the house. Christina Screams. Greg and Michael0 step back Greg: i cannot go in there! It is suicidal! Billy: Fine, go back! ready Fom? fom: Ready. Sia's bedroom Sia is still stuck under the roof. She is unconcious. Redmon wakes up Redmoon: Sia! Sia! He gets up and tries to lift the block on top of her. He cannot lift it. He opens the bedroom door and runs out into the smoke The square Billy and Fom run out of the house into the square Princess: Billy! Thank god! Christina: Where is Firewire! Fom: There is no way upstairs! The stairs have collapsed! Christina: Where is firewire! Billy: I think they are all up there. But.. I could not see, The smoke is too thick! And the fire is everywhere! There is no where to go! Christina: WHERE IS FIREWIRE! Fom:.. We.. We don't know Andy and Hugo's bedroom Andy and Hugo are still sat on the bed. There is no fire in their room, but the smoke is coming through under the door. There is a bang as the door opens and Redmoon runs in. He cloes the door behind him Hugo: DAD! Hugo runs up to Redmoon and hugs him Redmoon: We need to get into my room! Your mum is stuck and i need a hand lifting the roof! Andy: How! The house is full of smoke! Can we not wait until the fire is gone! Redmoon: That is the thing! The fire is not going to go! It is spreading! We have to move fast! It could be in the Gas tank any minute now! And when it gets there! We are gone! Andy: Spreading! What! Redmoon: look! We have to go and help your mum! Come on! Before it spreads upstairs! All 3 of them run out of the door. The Hallway upstairs is full of black smoke, and the banisters are on fire. They all run into Sia and Remoons room The square christina: I have to get him! She runs up to the house, but Nickyy catches her and pulls her back Christina: No. I have to save him! She is crying nickyy: Christina, You cannot go in there love! Christina: NO! Sia's room The room is filling up with smoke. The 3 boys are lifting the blocks off of Sia. She wakes up Sia: oh my god! Redmoon: Sia, Darling! It is going to be okay! Hugo: Mum! Andy: Mum! Mum! We are going to get you out mum! Andy pushes the last peice of roof off of Sia. She lets out a Gasp and gets up Hugo: Mum! He hugs her Redmoon: We have to get out! We have to go now! Before it is too late! The Square Christina is still crying. The firemen have still not arrived and everyone is now starting to get worried about firewire, aswell as the Kestle family. Suddenly, Firewire comes out of the front door, coughing and gasping for air. He is carrying 30stone, who is unconcious Christina: Firewire! Baby! Firewire walks down the steps and puts 30stone on the floor firewire: He is not dead! Not yet! We need to get him an ambulance! Nickyy: They are all coming! But are being held up! Annie: And the others? Firewire: I could not find them! i think they are all upstairs! Sia's room Redmoon: ready! Sia: Wait! Where is 30stone! Redmoon: Darling, we have not got time! The Gas tank is right below us! We need to get out.. and quick! Sia: I need my boy! Redmoon: ready! Sia: I need him! Redmoon: Go! Redmoon opens the door. They all run out the upstairs hallway and look at the stairs. They have collapsed Andy: We are going to need to jump! Sia: jump! redmoon: Yes! Jump! One at a time! Then run out of the door! Come on! Go! Andy Jumps into the downstairs hallway. The fire is all around him, He runs though it and out of the door The square Andy runs out of the door. His face is covered in ash and his hand is bleeding Annie: It is Andy! Greg: Huh! Fom and Greg run over to him and walk him away from the house Andy: They are coming! They will be here! Any minute now! Hugo suddenly emerges from the door. He is limping. Greg runs up to him and carries him over to Andy Andy: Bro! It is going to be okay! I promise! Hugo: Where is 30stone! Firewire: He is there, he is alive! You are going to be okay! I promise! The landing Redmoon and Sia are stil on the landing Redmoon: You go first! Sia: No you! Redmoon: Just go! Quickly! Sia jumps! As she does, The landing falls down taking Redmoon with it. As Sia lands she gets up and looks around. Redmoon has fallen through and is lying on the floor. There is a huge wall of fire between them! Sia: REdmoon! No! redmoon: just Go! Sia: no! Redmoon: Go, Quickly! Sia: No! Sia Feels a pair of arms around her. It is Firewire, He carries her out into the square, She is screaming and crying The Square Hugo: Mum! Sia: Redmoon! Someone save him! Please! The House Redmoon is lying on the floor still, unable to get up. the fire spreads onto the gas tank in the airing cupboard, right next to where Redmoon is lying Redmoon: Whispers*** Help Suddenly the gas tanks Explodes, with a deathening Bang The square Everyone has fallen onto the floor, as the house explodes. The Firetruck swings around the corner followed by the ambulance and police Sia: Redmoon! Redmoon! NOOOOO! __________________________ Thanks for reading! The next episode will be on Monday! Lewis ![]() xx |
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i have never read this soap... but i am a mother? to ben?!
why do i get such bad roles hahahahahahaha -goes to first episode to read- |
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