[Arneldo]

Hiya.

I need help douin English homework.
I need to write about a Walk through a Park during the day and during the night.
I wrote my one of a Park during the Day but i need to write one bout the night i have no idea what to write.
It kinda has to be descibed as Dark, Gloomy, Dangerous Etc.

Anyone got any idea?

Thanks.

[Princess]

I remember doing this exact thing a while back! Hmm let me think

[Dan_]

Hmm perhaps something to do with rustling of the tree's and the noises that might make you feel scared but you're reassured because of the man smiling in the moon?

[Pipergun]

I know the advice that we've often been given is to describe aspects using all 5 senses.

E.g. :

What you could see, hear, touch, smell and taste in the park.

+ Remember similies, metaphors, imagery etc...!

Hope this helps!

T

[Siouxsie]

how about walking through the park looking at the stars shining down on you

[BigSister]

trees rustling shadows lurking in the dark streetlamps people pass ing you dogs barking moon and stars shining down on you?

[Arneldo]

Thanks Peeps!

These are brillant!

Cheers!

[Lance]

Originally posted by Pipergun
I know the advice that we've often been given is to describe aspects using all 5 senses.

E.g. :

What you could see, hear, touch, smell and taste in the park.

+ Remember similies, metaphors, imagery etc...!

Hope this helps!

T

Thank you, Sir. But if I hear this advice once more I think I'll crack.

lol... Sorry but my English teacher, Captain Byrne, is so obsessive about this.

[Kaz]

Originally posted by Lance

Thank you, Sir. But if I hear this advice once more I think I'll crack.

lol... Sorry but my English teacher, Captain Byrne, is so obsessive about this.

Aye, but it doesn't half help to increase the number of words you use ..... for example:

Instead of 'The leaves on the tree rustled in the breeze' you can say ....

'The russet tinted leaves on the magnificent old oak tree rustled gently like tissue paper in the balmy autumn breeze'.

Bingo! Twice as many words in one sentence! I loved English!

Good luck with the homework, bb4eva ...... you've been given some good advice in this thread.

don't as i might do write. "it was windy in the forrest"
Nee good at inglish see

[Siouxsie]

cant spell either