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Old 24-07-2010, 07:56 PM #1
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Default I wrote this song what do you think
Verse 1
I have been looking right in front of my eyes
And the words I am seeing are playing a disguise
And I can’t know I can’t stop thinking
About this guy
Who I met shouldn’t have
And the words I say
Are telling goodbye
And they tell me to walk on
Like everything is fine
But I really don’t know what I should do
I am just a girl with a crush on you

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Verse 2
Yes I might sound crazy but I am out of disguise
I shouldn’t need to act like everything’s fine
Because you screw my head up
One go at a time
And I really hope you drive on by
When you see there do you feel what I feel
Or am I am just girl without any heels
Do I need to know what life’s all about
To get into your heart
I’m just hanging out

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Last Verse
But I am not gonna say no
I don’t want be home
On Friday and Saturday night
I just wanna hold you tight
But I know if it’s alright

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

Chorus
I am knocking right into my face baby
I am screaming and shouting cause its driving me crazy
And now that I shouldn’t have falled for a guy like you
And I know I shouldn’t have to
I don’t want to say that hurts inside
But every time I think I have to cry
I can’t stop thinking about the things that you do
I shouldn’t have fallen for you

(Song - Pretend to be nice TUNE)
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Far to cheesy, you need to take up some lyric lessons from Mr Novo
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I think it's really good.. Better than some I've heard. My friend once wrote a whole song about being on the Titanic.. it sucked
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Tear the lyrics up and throw them in the bin and start from scratch, come back with something better tomorrow
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Tear the lyrics up and throw them in the bin and start from scratch, come back with something better tomorrow
Lol.. that's harsh!!
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Thanks wrote it from my heart and i am really proud of it x
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Dont listen to Andy it is a good song.
All i ever do on this bloody forum is give the best advice and this is how you repay me
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All i ever do on this bloody forum is give the best advice and this is how you repay me
Because you ''advice'' isnt always good that's why.
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I wonder who this is about. LOL.
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Foxy, can you put it to music?
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Because you ''advice'' isnt always good that's why.
My advice is always honest and very right.. you would do well to follow in my footsteps
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Foxy, can you put it to music?
Oh for god sakes... anything but that
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I wonder who this is about. LOL.
Haha i have good news but yah i have got music to it the tune for the song is below x
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My advice is always honest and very right.. you would do well to follow in my footsteps
This song is good though a few tweeks here and there and it will be a perfect song. So that is a example of giving good advice not your ''advice''.
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Oh for god sakes... anything but that
It could be a catchy number!
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This song is good though a few tweeks here and there and it will be a perfect song. So that is a example of giving good advice not your ''advice''.
you haven't heard the song yet, you have just read the lyrics and they are cheesy and terrible and it would make a very average song..

that is the an example of great advice
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