[waterhog]

day 2 - poem brief 14.11.12

all coming round,
but was it a delight,
the first thing Colin said,
it was a rough night.
Nadine had reflection,
i think her summary was "balls of steel",
then reality hit,
being strong is not her best skill.
from the comedian was hope,
no humor absconding,
he feels real close,
and his camp is bonding.
David is not to keen about mixing,
with others it does frustrate,
he likes his camp,
no to a integrate.
Helen was preparing,
her next trial was calling,
while Charlie was not as hopeful,
and was positive again she will be falling.
Eric was understanding,
his compassion was no mystery,
but both camps went with out,
first time in history.
food at last,
but 2 were going to need enamel,
Nadine and Helen yet again,
eating eggs, spiders and toes of a camel.
the MP won,
with the items Nadine did not sit on the fence,
and before you all joke,
yes of-course the bill will be claimed as a expense.
both were happy,
equally as each other loud,
Nadine got the food,
but Helen was as excited and proud.
a Dingo Dollar challenge,
put peaces in and climb a wall,
i am loosing patients with Hugo,
but none to David will stand tall.
a phone call now,
live back to his gang,
but none are Twits that follow, (knock at twitter followers)
and that's why David was left to hang.
as a true sportsman,
losing was not sour,
that's why he lied about the price,
mass respect and power.
Hugo was no Boss,
you can clearly see his frustration,
Ant and Dec had a joke,
its a hard life to own a Dubai house and have a private education.
back to food,
all were fantasying,
i might set up a biscuit stall,
unlike my poetry money i will be exercising.
all told about the join,
is this going to be hell,
i suppose its just like expenses,
Nadine was the first to suggest a rebel.
camps merged,
all said hello but is there tranquility,
Hugo is not comfortable,
he feels like a refugee.
all told about the task,
shes up again with a smile,
now the group is one,
the tension has gone up by a mile.
that was day 2,
poetry or a disaster,
thanks for your time,
this forum is now going to need a plaster.


( this is how i saw last nights best show on tv. the question is - did i miss anything ?)

[reality1]

That was a bit like a task due to the length of it, I have a very short attention span, can you also post short versions, please? LOL

[waterhog]

the sun rose and then went down - is that short enough ?

[reality1]

Originally Posted by waterhog

the sun rose and then went down - is that short enough ?

Yes, thanks I wasn't being rude, I like your poems!

[waterhog]

i like you to reality - maybe one day i will do a poem dedicated to you ?

[Kate!]

Joe, that's my favourite poem you have done to date very entertaining.

- supporting Charlie Brooks and Brian Conley. -

[reality1]

Originally Posted by waterhog

i like you to reality - maybe one day i will do a poem dedicated to you ?

I am honoured and when you become a famous poet I will sell your poem to me on E-bay!

[waterhog]

forget you reality - i am now onto kate (joke) ps reality - i think the postage and sending of it will put you in arrears -

[reality1]

Don't put my address in poetry form please, or it will fill both sides of the envelope!
LOL
You can send a letter to me
But take your time as there's no hurry
You might have to deliver it by hand
We get very little post here in Thailand

[waterhog]

thats good - take me hat off to you.

[reality1]

Thanks! But you are the poet on here I am just an amateur

[King Gizzard]

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