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Old 10-12-2014, 05:45 PM #51
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As the door opens Paul sees Bradley stood in front of him fully naked. He just freezes and looks at Brad. "Take a picture it'll last longer" Brad says as he gets a towel before leaving the bathroom.
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are brad and paul gonna fuuuuck
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Very nice first episode! I really like the Candy/Candice drama! Can't wait to see more.
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Very nice first episode! I really like the Candy/Candice drama! Can't wait to see more.
Thanks I have some great storylines coming up. Episode 2 will be posted shortly
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..Jack, I read the first episode..(I'll read the second later when I have time..)..but you've set some great storylines there, well done.....
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..Jack, I read the first episode..(I'll read the second later when I have time..)..but you've set some great storylines there, well done.....
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Episode 3 will be up shortly.
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Any feedback would be good Good or bad feedback I want to hear what you guys think of it
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Just read all 3, love the stories so far Jack
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Aww thanks nat Happy that your enjoying it
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Absolutly loving it. im hooked already, its like a mix of corrie, emmerdale and eastenders all rolled into one with a bit swearing lol
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Absolutly loving it. im hooked already, its like a mix of corrie, emmerdale and eastenders all rolled into one with a bit swearing lol
Aww thanks mizzy I've got lots of storylines coming up that I think everyone will enjoy
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Don't peak too soon, keep some on the back burner. love it though
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I've got one hell of a storyline planned that will be happening in the next few months that will shock people
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can't wait for that
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Episode 4 to be up later today
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Is Duffy singing the theme tune?
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paul you ****ing **** **** how could you do this to sara ugh
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paul you ****ing **** **** how could you do this to sara ugh
He is thirsty and Sara doesn't help him with it anymore
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..I can see a lot of fall out from this Christmas and New Year, Jack and it's going to be messy.....seriously though, this is really exciting and well written...I'm looking forward to seeing it all develop...well done young man.....
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