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Old 27-03-2009, 03:40 AM #11
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TiBBOaks - Episode 8.

Opening Sequence:
"Knights of Cydonia" by Muse briefly plays. We replay the scene in Fom's basement, where Brona has just lunged at Fom and Doug has turned out the lights. A gunshot is heard. The scene changes to outside Iceman's bakery, where Loukas has slowly shut the door behind him. He locks it and pulls up his jacket's hood. He takes out a phone and dials. We then cut to LemonJam's house. LIZZEDJ looks at her phone and sees 4 missed calls from Matt. She deletes them, and quickly puts on a smile as LemonJam brings in a DVD for them to watch.

Scene One:
Fom's basement. It has been a few seconds since the gunshot, and Mrluvaluva fumbles for the lightswitch.
Brona: Aaaah it hurts! I'm bleeding!
She has been shot in the shoulder, and Sia has got out her phone to dial for the police. Fom runs for the stairs and out the door, and Doug quickly follows. Mrluvaluva rushes to find a first-aid kit.
Sia: It's going to be okay, it's alright...
Brona: Oh god, he killed Ben.
Sia: I know, I know. He won't get away with it, the police will see to that.
The call is put through and she gives her details.

Scene Two:
Outside Fom's house - he jumps into his car and Doug immediately climbs into the passenger's side, quicker than Fom had anticipated. He is now holding the gun and aims it towards Fom.
Doug: Drive.
Fom: Where?
Doug: Take me to Dad's. Now.

Scene Three:
Tom's house. He is sipping a glass of whiskey when he hears something outside. He goes to the back door and opens it, and Gemma is stood there. She screams and lunges wildly, holding the shovel Tom had used to dig the ditch.
Tom: Oh my-
He is unable to finish the sentence as he receives a sharp blow to the head.

Scene Four:
Loukas is approached by another young male. He greets him.
Billy: Did you just hear a gunshot?
Loukas: I don't know. You got the gear?
Billy: Of course. Let's go get wasted!

Scene Five:
Gemma has climbed into Tom's car and drives off, as Tom regains consciousness.

Scene Six:
Fom is driving along a dark country road. He notices an oncoming car with extraordinary bright headlights, and decides to swerve into it.
Doug: What the!?
They heavily scrape the other vehicle, and the car swerves off course into a hedge. Doug loses control of the gun and as soon as the car comes to a stop, Fom does a runner. Doug fumbles for the gun and, finally finding it, chases after him. The other car skids to a halt and a familiar woman steps out. She, too, is holding a gun.
Doug: GEMMA!?
Fom stops in his tracks and turns round in shock. She takes a shot and it hits his left leg. He falls to the floor in pain.
Doug: No, wait!
Gemma: He tried to kill me, and then left me in a ditch with some bloke he stabbed! I don't know what I saw in him!
Doug grabs the gun off of her and walks up to Fom.
Fom: Look, Doug, I'm sorry, but you've got to help me.
Doug: What was it you said earlier in the basement?
Fom: Huh?
Doug: About family. You said...
Fom: You can't trust anyone...
Doug: Great last words.
He shoots Fom square in the forehead.

Scene Seven:
LemonJam's house. A knock is heard at the door and LIZZEDJ goes to answer it. Matt is stood there, looking irritated.
Matt: I've been trying to call you.
LIZZEDJ: Shush!
She pushes him outside and shuts the door behind her.
Matt: What, are you seeing someone else?
LIZZEDJ: I'm married!

Scene Eight:
Outside Fom's house, Brona is taken off to the hospital in an ambulance. A small crowd of onlookers has gathered, as Mrluvaluva is talking to the police.
Nickyy: Oh, Baz, are you okay?
Baz: Yeah...I'm fine...
Nickyy: What's happened!?
Ash: I hear Fom shot his brother!
Mark: Oh no! He was cute!
Daren: I know!
Sam!: Hey!
Daren: Sssh, you're cuter.
Baz: I'll tell you everything...can we go somewhere a bit quieter?
He and Nickyy go back to her house.

Scene Nine:
Two hours have passed since Billy and Loukas went off to take drugs, and they are now heading home.
Billy: How many fingers am I holding up?
Loukas: Uhh...seven...teen?
Billy giggles hysterically, and playfully slaps Loukas. Loukas overreacts and falls into a dustbin, knocking it over. The noise attracts some attention from the small crowd gathered nearby.
Ash: LOUKAS? What are you doing?
Loukas: Oh hey mum! Can we get some pizza? I'm starving.
Ash: It's 1am! You should be in bed!
Billy: Hello, Loukas' mum. You are a sexy headmistress.
Loukas: Dude!
He punches Billy in the arm and Billy falls into the same dustbin.
Ash: Have you been...drinking?
Loukas: YES.
Ash: Inside, now! Billy, I'm calling your parents.
Billy: Whatever helps you sleep at night, bitch. I'm sorry. You're not a bitch. You're pretty.
Loukas: Billy, shut up!

Scene Ten:
Outside LemonJam's house, Matt is talking in loud whispers to Jen.
Matt: Married!?
Jen: Yes. It was a mistake sleeping with you, I'm sorry!
Matt: I'm not some bit on the side you know.
Jen: I know, but...it was a mistake!
LemonJam: What was?

Scene Eleven:
Nickyy's house. Baz has stopped talking and she stares at him, aghast.
Nickyy: I don't know what to say.
Baz: I just feel so...alone.
Nickyy gets up and hugs him, and he pulls her close.
Nickyy: Baz, you're squeezing me.
Baz: Sorry...
Nickyy: Look, do you want to stay over tonight? You'd have to sleep on the sofa, but it beats being home alone I guess.
Baz: That would be nice. Thanks.

Scene Twelve:
Doug and Gemma pull up into the now busy street, and get out of the car. Doug takes her over to an ambulance in order to see to the gash on the back of her head. A girl runs up screaming.
Sia: GEMMA!
Gemma: Sia! Oh god, are you okay?
Sia: I thought you were dead! I saw you dead! What the-?!
A policeman walks up to Doug and looks stern.
Andyman: Are you Mr. Fom?
Doug: No, I'm his brother...he's dead.
Sia: What? Did you kill him?
Gemma: No, I did...
Sia: Oh my god!
Doug: No, you shot him. I killed him.
Gemma: Oh...
Andyman places some handcuffs on Doug and leads him to the back of a police car.
Andyman: You are under arrest for the murder of Fom Lemon, you do not have to say anything but-
Gemma: No! Fom killed someone!
Sia: Two people!
Andyman: I'm sorry, I'm going to have to ask you to step away from the vehicle.
Doug is lowered into the car and the door is shut. He looks back at Sia and Gemma and smiles, as Sia bursts into tears.

Closing Sequence:
"The Drugs Don't Work" by The Verve plays over, and we see the police car drive off and turn around the corner at the end of the street. The scene cuts to outside the bakery, where a car pulls up and a man looks sternly at Billy. It's Tom, and orders Billy to get in the car. Tom waves to Ash, stood at the door, and drives off. Finally, we cut to outside LemonJam's house, where clothes are being thrown out of the upstairs window. Jen is at the foot of the steps crying and Matt walks off home.
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