[hannah.]

Far too obvious. don't like the clock and don't like the writing, I think that unless it's a special case writing just makes it easier to explain than doing it purely by your photo, which is the whole point.
also "can you stay awake" makes no sense in this context, I suffer from insomnia and when I'm going through a spell there's nothing I want more than to get to sleep.

The only thing I like about it is your facial expression, because it portrays the frustration of not getting being able to get to sleep, but this was ruined with everything else going on.