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Old 01-10-2015, 05:07 PM #26
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The episode starts with Dani walking home alone from her friends house. The avenue is in darkness because of a power cut. Dani hears footsteps coming from behind her. She quickly starts walking quicker before she starts running but the mystery person chases Dani. The mystery person catches up with Dani and they grab her before knocking her out. "Quick get her in the van now before anyone sees us with her." One of the mystery people say. As they are driving to there location Dani wakes up. She starts screaming for help. With the van all in darkness the mystery person grabs a hammer before hitting Dani over the head with it repeatedly. Once they arrive at location and get the body out into the light they notice that they have made a massive mistake. They have kidnapped the wrong girl and killed her. "What the hell are we going to do now, That isn't her that is Paul's daughter" says one of the mystery people. The other one tells them to put the body back in the van. We will have to hide the body somewhere no one will look for it.

Meanwhile at the Smiths house. Sara and Paul are worried because it's 4 in the morning and Dani has not returned home from Kiera's house. "I'm going to have to try and get hold of Kiera's mum again, I need to know my baby is ok" Sara says as she picks up the phone. Kiera's mum answers the phone and tells Sara that Dani left her house at about 11. Sara puts the phone down. "Kiera's mum said that Dani left at about 11, five bloody hours ago, She has even turned her phone off, Paul there is something wrong I know It, I can feel it, I think we should found the police" Says Sara. Paul tells her that Dani might of just gone off with couple of mates feel asleep on their sofa. Sara listens to what Paul has to say before going back upstairs to message all of Dani's friends on Facebook.

Meanwhile back at the location. The two mystery people are trying to decide where they can put Dani's Body. "we need gloves, Bleach and petrol, we need to get all our Dna off her body." Says one of the mystery as they both search for the stuff they need. Just as they about to get the body out of the car, A car pulls into the drive. They get out of the car. "Why you out here at this time of the morning" The man asks. They tell him that they are just giving the car a clean because one of them was sick in it before. One of them slowly move the person away from the car and into the house as the other one removes all clothing that might have there DNA on. The two mystery people then quickly get into the van before driving towards the woods to hide the body of the 17 year old girl.

Back at the Smiths Paul and Sara are still worrying as they've been up all night waiting for Dani to come home but she hasn't, They are worried as no one has seen her since she left Keira's house, "Paul where is our baby girl" Sara says as she keeps looking at her phone hoping that She gets a text Dani to tell her that she's fine, As Sara walks into the kitchen her phone goes off with a text, "Hey mum just texting to say I'm staying with this lad I met last night for a few days so don't stress about me xx" Says on the text that's come from Dani's phone, "oh thank god for that, she's texted me saying that's she fine and that she's at some boys house" Sara says as she goes to make a cup of tea

Meanwhile back at the woods, the pair are still digging whole to put Dani's body in, "We need to hurry up, the sun is starting to come up now, it's getting light" One of them say. They start digging quieter, "She won't be messing with us again will she" One of them say as they look at the other one.
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