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Old 08-12-2007, 01:05 PM #15
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Light peirced my eyes, and a solid figure was standing by the two open doors. He made a gesture with his hands, but I didn't no what he wanted. Everything was quiet. All I could hear was the sound of birds, twittering in the distance, like a choir of angels.

He made the gesture again, and then said something. I didn't know what. I was in shock. He stepped in to the Van, grabed me, then pulled me out. I looked around me. Long green fields and tree's surrounded me. Where was I?

He spat on the floor, and dropped a cigarette packet. The air became full with the smell of smoke. He spoke again, but this time I heard him. It was the Man's voice that I heard back in the house.

"Go." he said.

Go? Why go? What did he mean? Go where? I asked myself, again and again.

"She wants you gone. She doesn't want you around any more."

My heart began to beat faster. She wanted me gone. She didn't want me around any more. Why? What had I ever done to her? I tried to speak, but I just couldnt.

"Dont ever come back. Ever. If she finds out your here, if she finds out your anywhere, we are done."

Again, I tried to speak, but I couldn't. I looked in to the man's eyes. He was worried. Frightened. A Large man, frightened. He dropped his cigarette and began to walk away. He climbed in to his Van. I stood there, on a dusty track. The engine started.

No. No. Whats happening? Why? Where am I? Who is he? Why does she want me gone?

The van slowly began to pull away.

"NO!" I screamed. "Stop"

The white van continued to travel along the track.

"STOP! STOP! STOP!" I continued to cry, but he continued to travel away. I fell to the floor.

"Stop. Stop. Stop."

It was no use. I was alone.
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