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Old 02-12-2001, 09:12 PM #3
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"It's been a bit slower than I thought it would" Dean replied. "The groupies disappeared, thank goodness, it was starting to bug Vanessa"

Bubble came into the room with Stuart, attracted by the sound of the guitar.

"Well Dean Hows Venessa, " Stuart Asked

"She's fine" Dean said as he began picking a few chords on his guitar.

"I see you found the deck chair" Bubble quipped

"Oi cut that out you" Dean Joked.

Bubble turned to look at Helen and offered his hand to Paul "I hear Congratulations are in order"

"Yeah cool " Was all that Paul could say before Bubble turned to Helen. "So how long to go now"

"Oh 6 months" she said proudly rubing her abdomen.

"Stuart looked up at the cealing " I like how they did this place up Brian"

"Yes Stuart, when they had to knock down the original house they said they might do up an existing property instead of build a new one. I quite like it too, it has charm"

"How old is it" Dean asked

"By the look of it, and the plaque above the door as we came in it was built in 1869" Stuart answered

"I'm going to the kitchen to see Ama " Helen told Paul and left the room to go into the hall.

As she walked across the hallway, Helen thought she would fix her hair in one of the mirrors the BB crew had fitted.

Suddenly instead of her face in the mirror, the face of young girl stared out at her. Her clothes looked old. The figure was mouthing something, Helen could not make out.

Suddenly there was a hand on her shoulder. Helen Jumped round to see the face of Penny

"You ok H" she asked, "you look white as a sheet"

Helen turned round to look at the mirror, this time it was her own face. Suddenly her legs turned to jelly.

"Paul!" Penny yelled

Amma came out of the kitchen and helped Helen to sit down on the stairs.

"Do you need to see a doctor ?" Penny asked trying to be helpful

"It was horrible "was all that Helen could say.

Josh came out of the Kitchen to see what the comotion was about. Suddenly he felt very cold, his pychic sense was working overtime.
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