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Mark was now on his knees, in the middle of the Brotherhood circle. They were all bating furiously. Mark had to make the ultimate sacrifice: he was doomed to be the Brotherhood’s personal sex slave on an island in the middle of nowhere with no means of escape. He knew he deserved an eternity of hell, but he hadn’t realised it would be this bad. But the Brotherhood insisted that it wasn’t gay or anything, they were just doing their duty and punishing Mark for being a twit. Apparently.
Shaun, as he was the first member to make it off the island, returned to the real world (ILoveDC, this doesn’t concern you) and was, according to the terms of the game, given a mod position. Except all of the admins were either dead or incapacitated, so he couldn’t actually be granted his position. And the board soon became a target for spammers, multiple accounts and arguments with no real control over who said what. All of the regular members prior to Mark’s sick game began to pine for the days of overbearing moderating and ridiculous locks; because at least something got done back then – now it was all rubbish.
Stu survived his ordeal and returned to TiBB with a renewed sense of sarcasm. But, as a tribute to the fallen members of the moderating team, he led a charge of anti-swearing on TiBB, and due to the lack of control on the site, started to command a sizable group of keyboard terrorists who unofficially ran the site.
Magic was still banned. Gutted.
Red Moon, despite being something of a hero in the story, stayed away from the site; the troubles of real life getting him down. The same went for Kizwiz, who has a family to look after anyways.
Rory was the one to discover that Darenn and Vicky made it off the island; and soon reunited Darenn with Shaun. Shaun gave birth to a beautiful baby girl, who was named MrGaryy – Darenn’s dreams were realised. MrGaryy grew up to be absolutely fabulous and incredible fierce, I would not mess with her. Vicky was the godmother to MrGaryy, and in later life became MrGaryy’s manager when she went on to become Gary Faguilera – a burlesque dancer in a nightclub.
Gary Faguilera’s dance troupe consisted of Gary, Enid and Twilite Twitté; an older woman who reminded Gary’s parents of a child star they knew long ago... But she couldn’t possibly be the same person... Twilight Twitty died on the island, didn’t she? They always wondered, but she would never tell. xoxo Twilight Twitty's marketing team

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Mark was now on his knees, in the middle of the Brotherhood circle. They were all bating furiously. Mark had to make the ultimate sacrifice: he was doomed to be the Brotherhood’s personal sex slave on an island in the middle of nowhere with no means of escape. He knew he deserved an eternity of hell, but he hadn’t realised it would be this bad. But the Brotherhood insisted that it wasn’t gay or anything, they were just doing their duty and punishing Mark for being a twit. Apparently.
Shaun, as he was the first member to make it off the island, returned to the real world (ILoveDC, this doesn’t concern you) and was, according to the terms of the game, given a mod position. Except all of the admins were either dead or incapacitated, so he couldn’t actually be granted his position. And the board soon became a target for spammers, multiple accounts and arguments with no real control over who said what. All of the regular members prior to Mark’s sick game began to pine for the days of overbearing moderating and ridiculous locks; because at least something got done back then – now it was all rubbish.
Stu survived his ordeal and returned to TiBB with a renewed sense of sarcasm. But, as a tribute to the fallen members of the moderating team, he led a charge of anti-swearing on TiBB, and due to the lack of control on the site, started to command a sizable group of keyboard terrorists who unofficially ran the site.
Magic was still banned. Gutted.
Red Moon, despite being something of a hero in the story, stayed away from the site; the troubles of real life getting him down. The same went for Kizwiz, who has a family to look after anyways.
Rory was the one to discover that Darenn and Vicky made it off the island; and soon reunited Darenn with Shaun. Shaun gave birth to a beautiful baby girl, who was named MrGaryy – Darenn’s dreams were realised. MrGaryy grew up to be absolutely fabulous and incredible fierce, I would not mess with her. Vicky was the godmother to MrGaryy, and in later life became MrGaryy’s manager when she went on to become Gary Faguilera – a burlesque dancer in a nightclub.
Gary Faguilera’s dance troupe consisted of Gary, Enid and Twilite Twitté; an older woman who reminded Gary’s parents of a child star they knew long ago... But she couldn’t possibly be the same person... Twilight Twitty died on the island, didn’t she? They always wondered, but she would never tell. xoxo Twilight Twitty's marketing team

Twilight Twitty: Resurrection out in stores on Monday!

The End.
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*If there was a standing ovation smiley I'd use it*

Lmfao at the first two lines of the epilogue, it's the sort of thing you could actually imagine (not that you'd want too)
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Rofl brilliant ending Greg.
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OMG that was amazing <3 Zee your a really talented writer.
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Might start a sequel to this. I started a sequel to this ages ago but it never got off the ground but I think it would work better now because there are so many new members
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