[iRyan]

Hey everyone, I wanted to share a short film I made for my Video Production 1 class at university. It's the first film i've ever made, so it was all quite experimental for me. I wanted to create something vivid, surreal, and dream-like. It's very weird, I hope you'll find it interesting/entertaining

Youtube video

[Fetch The Bolt Cutters]

i loved it

[Samm]

really good! hope you do well

[iRyan]

Thanks guys!

[kirklancaster]

Excellent.

Short film - like short story writing - is so difficult to pull off, not least because of the time constraints, but you did it and I genuinely enjoyed watching your film.

I think that you succeeded in your goal as far as surrealism is concerned, but were not so self-indulgent as to render the film plot 'unfathomable', and I was 'Hooked' immediately and suitably intrigued enough to 'want' to continue watching - something which does not always happen when I have watched some other shorts.

I think that you may well make a success of your chosen career, if this is your very first film, and I sincerely hope that you do.

[iRyan]

Originally Posted by kirklancaster

Excellent.

Short film - like short story writing - is so difficult to pull off, not least because of the time constraints, but you did it and I genuinely enjoyed watching your film.

I think that you succeeded in your goal as far as surrealism is concerned, but were not so self-indulgent as to render the film plot 'unfathomable', and I was 'Hooked' immediately and suitably intrigued enough to 'want' to continue watching - something which does not always happen when I have watched some other shorts.

I think that you may well make a success of your chosen career, if this is your very first film, and I sincerely hope that you do.

That really means a lot to hear man, thank you so much!

[Ammi]

..I like this a lot iRyan…I watched it a little earlier but wanted to watch it again…is that a friend of yours in the vid..?..she’s very good also in her portrayal…anyway I’m glad that I watched again because I didn’t connect the first time with what she was watching on TV and then when she fell into lucid dream state…was the nurse in white, representing the white rabbit in Wonderland..?../I love the blue and the red filter effects..and then the connection again with ‘drink me’ and Alice… and her ‘reality’ change again…this is so well thought out..…wow, if this is your first film as well, it’s excellent and very thought inducing…and a perfect choice of sound track also….…(well done to the dreamer, she did a great job and did you proud…)….



…(just out of interest, how many hours of filming were there for those 5 minutes in your short film..?...)…