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07-01-2017, 07:04 PM

Braden

Too glam to give a damn

Join Date: Jun 2008

Posts: 21,523

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Braden

Too glam to give a damn

Join Date: Jun 2008

Posts: 21,523

Total Awards: 3

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Originally Posted by Dezzy

Your character descriptions serve a point so they're fine. I'm talking more about how you described how Rachel cleaned up stuff, it was a little excessive at times.

A minor criticism however.

Okie Dokie. Thanks again

I really appreciate your comments because I don't think I've won, and the prize is feedback from a publishing house in London.

TiBB can be just as good for these types of things though

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