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19-02-2009, 08:54 PM
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Alreet cool, ive been really looking forward to todays lol.
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19-02-2009, 09:14 PM
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Supernoodles flat
Fom: Ninastar! Supernoodles: Oh my god Ninastar is lying on the floor in a pool of blood Ninastar: Huh, No! Fom: Ninastar! Fom bends down and rests her head on his hand Ninastar: That baby, please, just call an ambulance! Fom: What HAVE YOU DONE! (To Supernoodles) Supernoodles: Oh my god! Supernoodles picks up the gun and puts it to her head, Themichael0 comes running in themichael0: Oh my god, what h.. Supernoodles no! Supernoodles shoots, and drops to the floor dead. Themichael0 screams. Fom drops the phone as Ninastar passes out Annie, BigSister and Darenns house Bigsister is sitting on the sofa, crying, Darenn walks in Darenn: I have been thinking Bigsister: About what She sits up and Darenn sits down Bigsister: About what? Darenn: I don't know? This place, Life, You Bigsister: Me? Darenn: Lets rewind Darenn puts his hands on Bigsisters cheek, and Snogs her _________________________________________ Tonight was only tiny, because i have still not got my lappy back and had to write it all up in the last 30 mins... But another half will be tomorrow along with tomorrows episode x |
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19-02-2009, 09:30 PM
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Whoo does that mean double episode tomorrow?
Poor Caitlin and Laura... I didnt get how Caitlin got hurt tho or was that in the last episode il have to read thru again lol. |
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19-02-2009, 09:33 PM
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retro physical
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 Haha, interesting twist Lewis. &BigSister 
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19-02-2009, 09:33 PM
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Wow laura shot caitlin... harsh..
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20-02-2009, 09:57 AM
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Thankyou to all of the great feedback on last nights episode!
As you know, last nights episode was a tiny one! ?But tonight Tibbenders is back with a bang, with a double episode! Will Ninastar die? What is going on between Bigsister and Darenn? What are the new family hiding from the square? What is Firewire hiding from Christina? All will be revealed shortly! |
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20-02-2009, 06:59 PM
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Hey Guys
 New episode tonight! Last one of this week! Will post a week round up tomorrow when have more time! Quite busy with family right now.. so, you will have to wait  Here is the final episode of week 2! Come back on Monday for the next episode! ______________________________ Bigsisters house Bigsister and Darenn are lying on the floor under a cover Darenn: My father will be so happy Bigsister: Huh? Darenn: Never mind Annie walks into the house Annie: Mum, i'm home Bigsister: Oh no, what do we do! Darenn: I don't know! Annie walks into the living room Annie: Mum! Bigsister: Hi Hunny Supernoodles flat The police and Ambulance are now at the flat. Supernoodles is being carried out to an ambulance in a body bag, and Ninstar is still unconcious, in the back of another ambulance with Fom Fom: Ninastar, please wake up! Please! He starts crying. Meanwhile themichael0 is sitting on a park bench on his own, crying JDIZZELS house Billy: I cannot believe it Shaun: You cannot tell your mother son Billy: How can i not tell her dad! Shaun: Just please! Do not tell her! Jdizzel: Me and your dad, we are in love! Billy: What about mum? What about her? You have been married for the last 12 years and now you are going to chuck it down the drain for a girl who is more than half your age Shaun: Me and your mum have been on the rocks for years son! Billy: Don't be stupid! You love eachover, everyone knows that! What about Venice? Jdizzel: He's taking me, arent you hunny Billy: What! Shaun: Son, that was just a lie to your mum! Billy: When are you going? Shaun: Well, tomorrow? Billy: What so you were just going to leave me and mum and run off with Barbie!? Jdizzel: How dare you! Shaun: Do not talk to her like that! Billy: This is unbelievable dad! Billy runs out of the front door Shaun: Billy! Billy! Firewires house Christina and Firewire are sitting on the sofa together Christina: We can have a huge white wedding and everything! I have to tell dad! Firewire: Your dad, i thought you hated him Christina: Well, i like to forgive and forget The hospital Princess: I came as soon as i heard! Fom: Oh, god! you gave me a fright! Princess: Sorry, how is she doing? Fom: I don't know, they wont tell me anything or let me in! Suddenly, a loud beeping noise comes from the emergency room Ninstar is in and a crowd of doctors and nurse run in Fom: Oh my god! No! Firewires house Christina is on the phone to her father, Mark, who is still in hospital after breaking his leg Christina: Yeah, we are getting married!... What do you mean, don't be stupid!.. Yeah... Yeah.. But we are in love dad!.. You know what, i don't care! Christina puts the phone down Christina: Oh god Firewire: Dad being a pain? Christina: First he rings up because i am calling him at 9 at night. Now he doesn't want me as a stepdaughter anymore, and is going to call me his "Widow daughter" Firewire: Come here He gives her a big hug Firewire: It will be alright The Kestle house Everybody has now moved into the house and unpacked. The whole family are in the living room Sia: Right, we all know the rules okay! 30stone: Mum, i am 21, i don't need rules! Sia: Keep out of trouble and make Hugo: Me proud. We know, heard it all before! Sia: ESPECIALLY you Hugo! You have school on Monday! We have to get your uniform done tomorrow and on Sunday i am taking you out for a treat! Hugo: Treat, what's that! Andy: Can't i have a treat? 30stone: And me! Dezzy: And me Amby: Dezzy, don't be so rude son 30stone: Amby, Shut up.. he can do what he wants Amby: And that is how he will end up like you! Amby stands up, takes dezzy's hand and walks him up to bed 30stone: Good! You can't beat me! Redmoon: Oh shut it son, you are so full of yourself Amby: (From upstairs) Where are Dezzy's Pyjamas? Sia: In the airing cupboard love Amby: Thanks Redmoon: Shouldn't you be up putting him to bed too son 30stone: No, don't be silly. That is what a woman is for Sia: Oi you! Shut it! The hospital Fom walks out of the Dr's pffice to Princess, he is crying Fom: It's gone. The baby's gone _________________________ Thanks for reading
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20-02-2009, 07:05 PM
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Yay!
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20-02-2009, 07:32 PM
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Lol ^^^
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20-02-2009, 07:55 PM
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21-02-2009, 09:04 AM
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Mark hates you Xtina
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21-02-2009, 11:30 AM
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Bump
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21-02-2009, 03:41 PM
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lol give me time. |
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21-02-2009, 05:34 PM
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Lol, Time is a definate need
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