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21-02-2009, 05:40 PM
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Lol that doesnt sound good..
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21-02-2009, 05:41 PM
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I know it doesn't
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21-02-2009, 05:52 PM
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Wow thats good. You should do a family tree thing or sumin.
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23-02-2009, 08:17 PM
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Not tonight
 Been really busy with coursework over the last few days, not had time to finish it off and laptop left at school for tonight because i have media tomorrow 1st thing.. Double tomorrow  sorry |
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23-02-2009, 08:42 PM
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Im getting withdrawal symptoms lewis!!!
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23-02-2009, 08:47 PM
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Quote:
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23-02-2009, 08:53 PM
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Lapppy at school
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23-02-2009, 09:43 PM
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Falling behind now..
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24-02-2009, 06:52 PM
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Episode Will be posted in about 30 minutes!
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24-02-2009, 07:27 PM
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Here is tonights episode! There was no episode yesterday
so the episode before this can be found in the week two sum up, which is linked in the front post of this thread! There will be another episode tomorrow because of the missing episode yesterday! Episode 11  ________________________ The Square It is morning in the square and it is silent. A car pulls up outside of the vic and David jumps out of the car. He is wearing a suit and has a rolex watch. He is a tall man in his early 40's with a medium build The Kestle house The whole Family is Gathered in the kitchen Hugo: What is going on? Andy: Mum has an announcement Sia: Yes indeed, i do! Amby: Well come on then, i need to get Dezzy to his new nursery! Sia: Calm down, Calm down! 30stone: Who cares about nursery! Let him be free, that is the way to life! Redmoon: Would you be quite! Your mother is trying to talk! Dezzy: I'm Hungry mummy! Amby: shh son, i will get you something in a minute Dezzy: But i am HUNGRY! He stamps his feet 30stone: Oi son! Shut your moaning little face and listen to nanny! You don;t want a smacked bottom again do you! Sia: Thankyou! Right, as you know, we are having a fresh start! No more trouble, no more booze, no more Drugs and no more David threatening us! Redmoon: Thank god for that Sia: Ehem, i am trying to talk! 30stone: Yeah Dad! Hugo: Shut up 30stone! 30stone: You shut up! Amby: You two, Both shut up! Sia: Yes, Thankyou! AS i was saying! I want you all to have a brilliant day and not let anything get in the way of you! Make me proud! Hugo: We wil mum, now can i go! I just want to get today over with! Andy: Aww, schoolchild! I am going to go out today! Not doing ANY schoolwork, because i have no school! Sia: Not until we find a decent college or job for you Andy! And you 30stone, you are going to have to look for a job today! 30stone: What about Amby? Amby: Hey, don't drag me into this. I am busy looking after our son! Dezzy: HUNGRY! FEED ME! The hospital Ninastar is still in intensive care, being kept alive by a breathing machine. Fom is sat in the chair next to her Fom: Oh god, i wish you would just come back babe. I wish i could re-wind time, make everything go back! This is all my fault! TheMichael0: Yes it is! fom: Oh my god! You surprised me! Themichael0 runs up and grabs Fom by the neck Themichael0: YOU KILLED HER! IT WAS YOU! YOU KILLED Supernoodles AND NOW I AM GOING TO KILL YOU! FOm: Help! A Doctor runs into the room to find Themichael0 choking Fom. He grabs themichael0 and pulls him away Doctor: SECURITY! themichael0: I am gonna kill you! You are not getting away with this! Princess, Billy and Shauns house Billy is sitting on the sofa on his own, Shaun walks in Shaun: Son, thanks for not telling Billy: You either break it with Jdizzel tonight, or mum is going to know! Princess walks in in a dressing gown Princess: Break what with Jdizzel and tell me what! Annie, Bigsister and Darenns house Bigsister and Annie are in the kitchen, not speaking Bigsister: Why wont you speak to me! Annie: Mum, He is Gay! Bigsister: Oh well, a bit on the side, that is what he is! Annie: It is wrong! You cannot go out with a gay man mum! Bigsister: Oh get over it! Anyway, i need to get an outfit for supernoodles funeral Annie: Her Funeral! What happened to her? Bigsister: You haven't heard? Princess, Billy and Shauns house Princess: Go on, tell me what! Shaun: Well, we were.. Billy: They have made a bet with eachover over you Shaun: Yeah, Princess: And what bet was this? Billy: They were betting over how long it would take you to pack for Venice! Princess: Oh, thank God! I thought you were seeing her behind my back or something! Oh well, Anyone want tea? Billy: Er yeah please Shaun: No thanks honey, i have to be somewhere Princess: Okay Princess walks out into the kitchen Billy: You have until tonight at 7 to break it with Jdizzel, or i am spilling! _________________________________ So there you go! enjoy
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24-02-2009, 08:49 PM
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Thoughts?
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24-02-2009, 08:55 PM
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Thanks
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24-02-2009, 09:01 PM
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Its great lewis though i HATE being an asshole to family lol
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24-02-2009, 09:05 PM
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30stone
[spoil]on fire night, people see the real you [/spoil]
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24-02-2009, 09:09 PM
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Right so that means im going to be either a Complete wuss or a Psycho lol.
I wanna be a nice boyfriend/ dad lol. |
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24-02-2009, 09:12 PM
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Ooops.. Spillage! 
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