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11-02-2009, 07:43 PM
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Look at the new advert poster! More details coming soon!
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11-02-2009, 07:51 PM
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Ohhh this week sounds good!!!
Lewis.. am i guna be in this? |
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11-02-2009, 07:53 PM
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11-02-2009, 07:55 PM
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Awesome, and by the way i did add you on msn i think, not sure if you have accepted or not?
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11-02-2009, 07:56 PM
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11-02-2009, 09:03 PM
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Darenn, Ben and Andy, threesome 
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11-02-2009, 09:05 PM
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lol.
But... i dont think so  I want to hurt some one )= Christina that was not needed 
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11-02-2009, 09:05 PM
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11-02-2009, 09:08 PM
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Naturally, id love a roll like that lewis
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11-02-2009, 09:09 PM
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11-02-2009, 09:12 PM
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And cool sounds good, how long does it take to write these as seems like you must put quite a bit of time and thought into them? |
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11-02-2009, 09:15 PM
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Aha a *dead* moment? lol!
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11-02-2009, 09:16 PM
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Well It usually takes me about 30 minutes to write an episode. That is with some heavy planning though. I have got the next two months planned, because i started planning on Boxing day. Haha. I have the next couple of weeks actually written and proof checked, and i am now starting to develop the big storyline hitting the square, Fire night!
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11-02-2009, 09:18 PM
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 I promised i wouldnt ruin that one.. how about *tries to commit suicide?*.. nah jokes 
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11-02-2009, 09:39 PM
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Lol aha cant do that it doesnt sound to good lol.
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11-02-2009, 10:26 PM
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M C F L Y <3
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ILY2  Tibbenders is great  xx
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12-02-2009, 07:08 PM
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Hello Guys! After a long wait.. Here is episode 5!
__________________________ Princess, Billy and Shauns house Princess comes into the kitchen to find Billy looking at the house ads in the newspaper Princess: Morning love, Looking at houses? Billy: Yeah, to rent. They have a few nice ones down in the new block of flats where Supernoodles has moved? Princess: Oh really? Sounds nice! How much? Billy: Only Ł125 a week, with free broadbrand Princess: Deal, you should go for it! Billy: What are you going to do with the house when you go off to Venice? Princess: What do you mean? We are only going for a couple of weeks Billy: I know, but I have something that may change your mind, a competition Princess: Competition for what? Billy: To win a free apartment on the edge of the river. You get all of your bills paid for free and you get free groceries for a year Princess: Yes dear, but what are the chances of me winning that? Billy: You have every chance! Only people who live in Walford are allowed to enter, and they are doing the grand prize draw in the vic! Princess: Oh my god! Where do you enter!!! Supernoodles House Supernoodles is packing a bag. she still has tears rolling down her eyes. She has her passport ready and is about to go out of the door, when someone walks in instead! It is MichaelO, Supernoodles husband! MichaelO is a 24 year old well built male Michael0: And where do you think you're going? Supernoodles: Ermm, Nowhere. How was the holiday? She glances at the clock, it is now 1 o clock Michael0: Right then, do i get a cup of tea from my beautiful girlfriend or do i have to do it myself? Supernodles: Look babe, i really have to go.. we need milk Supernoodles puts the bag down and runs out of the door, with just her passport in her pocket Michael0: Oh, Bye Annie and BigSisters house BigSister: Darenn, we have decided that you can stay here for a few weeks if you want? Darenn: What! Really? Annie: No.. Darenn: Oh, never mind BigSister: No, Annie was just joking, of course you can! Darenn: Oh thankyou! You are a Hero! Now, where is the local pub? We need to celebrate! Annie Sighs The vic The pub is now open. Christina is at the bar serving, Firewire walks in and comes up to the bar Firewire: I think we need to talk Christina: No we don't. It was a mistake, nothing happened Firewire: I am not stupid. You clearly made a move on me last night and i want to know why? Christina: Look, just forget about it, like you said, look towards the future, not the past! Firewire walks away as Sam walks in with Hannah Sam: Well, look at you two lovers then Christina: Why don't you get your Stupid little face and hit it against a brick wall! Firewire: Leave it Christina Hannah: How dare you talk to Sammy boy like that! Christina: And You are! Hannah: I am Sams girlfriend, Hannah Hannah pulls a cheeky smile at Christina. She is a feisty 14 year old girl with a great fashion sense. BigSister and Darenn walk into the pub. Darenn is wearing a furry coat and pink skin-tight trousers BigSister: And here she is, the Queen Vic Darenn: Well, it is hardly the sexiest place in the world, But it will do! I am buying the first round, what do you want? BigSister: No, I oblige, the first round is on me! Darenn: Oh, okay then, if you must. I will have a Cocktail please, Now where is the Dj, we need to put on some decent music! Sam: What are you wearing mate, i though Paris Hilton had walked in for a minute! Darenn: For a guy like me that is a compliment Sam: Well, for a guy like me, it isn't Hannah and Sam laugh, Darenn walks off to get a table Sam: What a weirdo! Hannah: I know, Maybe he was looking for the Gay bar? They both start laughing again Sam: Well, if he slept round BigSisters house last night, No wonder he has turned gay They both start laughing again Christina: Anyway you two, you are not allowed in the Bar, so I suggest you leave now, or I will kick you out! Sam: Try it Hannah: Come on Sam, lets just go! Leave your lonely sister here Sam: oh, she isn’t my sister, just my step sister. Thank god we are not blood related, I couldn’t bear to have the same blood as her! Christina: Just get out! Sam: She is just jealous because my dad never abused me when I was younger! Christina: Just GET OUT! They both walk out, Laughing, as Princess walks in to find Shaun sitting at the bar Princess: Oh! Just the man I needed! Shaun: Hello My Darling, and your morning has been? Princess: Brilliant thankyou, I have entered a competition! Shaun: What competition? Princess points to a poster with the details of the Venice competition, up on the wall near the door Shaun: Oh my god Princess: I know! How exciting! It means we can live there! Not just go there!… Oh my god, That “Oh my god” Was a bad “Oh My god” wasn’t it Shaun: Oh no dear, whatever you want, anyway, I better be off to the bank! No time to talk at this current moment Princess: Oh, Bye then Christina: See you Shaun The Airport Supernoodles is in the airport looking for Fom. Ninastar is also in the airport, looking for Fom. Supernoodles goes into the waiting room, and finds Fom, With Ninastar !They are kissing Ninastar: I thought you had gone! Fom: I Love you so much, i will never do that again They are both crying. Fom sees Supernoodles, who is also Crying. He mimes to her with his mouth Fom: I'm Sorry The allotments Shaun enters the allotments. He walks up to a girl and kisses her passionately Shaun: Another week and we can be out of here. Just me and you babe, no Princess, no Billy. Just us The Girls face is shown, She is only 17 years old. She has a pretty face and looks nothing like the 45 year old Shaun. It is… JDIZZEL: Oh, I do love you Shaun! __________________________ Wow, What an exciting episode! Come again tomorrow night at 7pm for the last episode of the week! Here are a few snippets of tomorrows episode, just for you! [spoil]Ninastar: So you thought you would leave me and the baby behind did you?[/spoil] [spoil]A Gunshot rings from Supernoodles Flat across the square[/spoil] |
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12-02-2009, 07:41 PM
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Wow! What do you think then?
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12-02-2009, 08:00 PM
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