First Place - Josh
Quote:

Save More, Live Better is an online service which helps people save money on everyday jobs, such as shopping for food or buying clothes. Users type in the shop they bought from, scan the barcode and the app tracks how much money you have spent and where you can save.

We plan on making money by placing banner ads on screen from sponsors. Should users want to remove ads, they can do so by paying a £/$1.99 fee.
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Nicky - i'm partially interested, but only that you made more profit than spending the money. I invest 25,000
Calderyon - Would be helpful to people who cannot manage their economy well. Has some potential, but I think there are lots of competition in these types of apps. Only investing £1000.
Ant - I'M OUT!
For starters, you used an image by Kelly Santo to improve the Mint app for Android. I am NOT investing into a company that is liable to a lawsuit.
As well as this, your title is similar to Wal-mart's slogon, "Save Money Live Better". And that's where it falls through. Your title is lengthy as **** and reads like a slogan. What app has more than two words? It's gotta be quick to type in and snappy, like Facebook, Grindr, Hornet. Can people be arsed typing out "Save More, Live Better"? CERTAINLY NOT ME especially with that cheeky comma.
Simply put, you are contradicting yourself with your so called 'title' - you are not even saving your customers precious time, you're wasting it by making them type out that long ass slogan into the App Store. Also your main focus needs to be saving money yourself because let's be real once Miss Santo sees you're using her IP without her permission you're getting SUED!
Also, doesn't this app require people to have already done their potentially expensive shop? Could you NOT have simply thought of a quick and free way of them comparing prices? These bitches are meant to sit there and scan their ****ing £100+ weekly shop? THEIR ICE CREAM WILL BE ****ING MELTED BY THE TIME IT'S DONE! Honestly fuming I feel like my business degree has been violated by this display
Total investment: £26,000