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...not an alliance between Rychard and Arranthian...that feels quite uneasy, Rychard can’t be trusted at all...
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Indeed, he's not an out and out bad guy, but he's also not someone who you'd put your life in the hands of
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...’...Not because of some dumb, mythical powers... Because you are Roisin Luna..’...I like that..... Obviously there are the powers of the crystals and those given to the Moon Descendants etc...but it’s also remembering that those things don’t define the people they are.../...their characters, you know....they are who they are regardless of powers...maybe it would have been a better thing if Roisin hadn’t arrived when she did and distracted Ariel from destroying Amanda...I think there are very dark things to come from Amanda...

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...’...Not because of some dumb, mythical powers... Because you are Roisin Luna..’...I like that..... Obviously there are the powers of the crystals and those given to the Moon Descendants etc...but it’s also remembering that those things don’t define the people they are.../...their characters, you know....they are who they are regardless of powers...maybe it would have been a better thing if Roisin hadn’t arrived when she did and distracted Ariel from destroying Amanda...I think there are very dark things to come from Amanda...
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Roisin needed to hear that I think
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...I don’t know, do we think this could be Amanda showing genuine remorse, could she possibly be changed or is it just a fleeting moment of self pity...?...I liked that chapter, showing all of their varying thoughts through the storm...some thoughts ‘still raging and storming inside’ as well...it also mirrors the real storms that some have had recently as well, Scarlett..so it’s a perfectly thought out chapter....isn’t it funny how...(...as you mentioned in there..)...some of us can be freaked out by 8 tiny little spider legs scuttling about...and yet we're fascinated and mesmerised by the universe raging in its dangerous glory in a storm....

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The storms outside gave me the inspiration for the chapter I thought it'd be a good time to slow down a little and do a little character chapter. With the characters airing their fears and hopes and it's true about the different phobias we all have lol
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There might be odd days at the moment without new chapters, I've just started a new job and need a little time to settle in xD So my mind doesnt whirr in writing mode atm xD
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There might be odd days at the moment without new chapters, I've just started a new job and need a little time to settle in xD So my mind doesnt whirr in writing mode atm xD
...the story can wait, those pages will write in time, Scarlett...trying to force them just wouldn’t make them right and you wouldn’t be happy with them...it seems appropriate also that your stories and characters now have a break because your focus is needed elsewhere...you’ve given them so much of your time at a time when you were able to and probably needed to...but as their worlds have change, so does yours..?...I’m so thrilled about your job, Scarlett......this has been such a difficult time for you with your redundancy also...but the page has turned and a new chapter for you, eh...and just the best thing to divert your focus on, the best news...I’m so thrilled for you......

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True! I thought it'd be better to write chapters at a slower pace til I'm all settled in Thank you too I'm actually working right next door to where I used to work lol
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....eeek, this is building up to a battle and I’m pretty sure that not everyone is going to survive this......I’m also worried about Roisin because she’s still quite week and if she were to use her powers, that would weaken her further...
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True! I thought it'd be better to write chapters at a slower pace til I'm all settled in Thank you too I'm actually working right next door to where I used to work lol
....awwww, I’m so pleased for you......you must be so thrilled to be working again...and you’re not going to get lost finding your new workplace.....isn’t life strange how it works out...I’m truly thrilled, Scarlett.....
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....awwww, I’m so pleased for you......you must be so thrilled to be working again...and you’re not going to get lost finding your new workplace.....isn’t life strange how it works out...I’m truly thrilled, Scarlett.....
Indeed! I'm keeping the door open on the chance of returning to the old place, when it reopens in October, depending on circumstances
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....eeek, this is building up to a battle and I’m pretty sure that not everyone is going to survive this......I’m also worried about Roisin because she’s still quite week and if she were to use her powers, that would weaken her further...
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Indeed, two crystals that Roisin can't absorb now :O
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Indeed! I'm keeping the door open on the chance of returning to the old place, when it reopens in October, depending on circumstances
...well, this is opening up a possible choice/another option for you because you might prefer your working experience at your new job...things are turning and in a positive way and I wish you the very, very best.....
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Indeed! It's a while before my old place opens, so it'll be enough time to judge which I prefer
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...I know we can’t appreciate these things for the time they give us to stop and take a life pause...because there are worrying factors involved as well..?..but it really has been lovely to have had the time to focus on your stories...and Scarlett, you truly are a wonderful writer and I’m totally enjoying ‘that journey’ in your life...your writing journey......
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Crystalla will continue for a long time to come, so the journey is far from over
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...I look forward to continuing......but as always, just in your own time ......
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I've got some ideas for chapters, will try and do something tonight
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A teaser for the next chapter!
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...oh my gosh...the power of life or death...dun, dun, dun..../...exciting teaser...
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Thank you!

I requested a transfer to another area in work today, I decided I didnt wanna go into serving in a restaraunt again and will be doing housekeeping, this will leave me with a good amount of free time to write I couldn't handle doing split shifts again
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I requested a transfer to another area in work today, I decided I didnt wanna go into serving in a restaraunt again and will be doing housekeeping, this will leave me with a good amount of free time to write I couldn't handle doing split shifts again
...that’s the thing really...to try to use this awful work life experience to make any positive changes that work better for you, if you’re able to...a role that you may like more/plus working hours that suit you better and fit with your writing as well...I hope that your transfer all works out as you’re hoping it will, Scarlett.....
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